Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Creation Sleeps"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Delahay
I find it impressive that you are able to say so much in just two short lines. In doing so you ask an eternal question that mankind can't help wondering about. Very well dont.
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I find it impressive that you are able to say so much in just two short lines. In doing so you ask an eternal question that mankind can't help wondering about. Very well dont.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from MizKat
Hi GW,
this is a very nice poem and the picture you used with it is great too. I enjoyed the read. When I leave this world I will be in a better place, in heaven with God.
Kat
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Hi GW,
this is a very nice poem and the picture you used with it is great too. I enjoyed the read. When I leave this world I will be in a better place, in heaven with God.
Kat
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from ElPoetry001
Excellent
The night gives yet another view of our existence, the not so clear actions that take place in shadows, the objects are the same in content but different in perception.
As we consider the now, in the bright Sun, should we also not enjoy the nights that only Nature can provide, for awakening is not a certainty.
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Excellent
The night gives yet another view of our existence, the not so clear actions that take place in shadows, the objects are the same in content but different in perception.
As we consider the now, in the bright Sun, should we also not enjoy the nights that only Nature can provide, for awakening is not a certainty.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. I really like the simple depth to this. It is clear and straightforward....and a true wakeup call. Thank you. padumachitta.
Ps...if you get time please check out my 'join me' it is in the same direction......it is about 37 or so on the list.....thanks
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Hi. I really like the simple depth to this. It is clear and straightforward....and a true wakeup call. Thank you. padumachitta.
Ps...if you get time please check out my 'join me' it is in the same direction......it is about 37 or so on the list.....thanks
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from RGstar
A good question indeed. Let us hope the view continues on into tomorrow so the dreams continue.
A nice image to end the day, let us hope the sunset is equally as interesting.
Best wishes,
RG
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A good question indeed. Let us hope the view continues on into tomorrow so the dreams continue.
A nice image to end the day, let us hope the sunset is equally as interesting.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from freepass
It was very good
and it already has 2 ribbons
So i'm not the only one who thinks so
5 very big stars*****
Good luck with it
go for quality seal
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It was very good
and it already has 2 ribbons
So i'm not the only one who thinks so
5 very big stars*****
Good luck with it
go for quality seal
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from James Dooney
I love this. Its so short, sweet, and straight to the point. You have done very well here with this one I reckon. Excellent job indeed.
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I love this. Its so short, sweet, and straight to the point. You have done very well here with this one I reckon. Excellent job indeed.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You just described faith. The knowledge that we will wake up and see tomorrow morning. I enjoyed reading your wonderfully written poem.
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You just described faith. The knowledge that we will wake up and see tomorrow morning. I enjoyed reading your wonderfully written poem.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from Malachai
I love the words but I would choose a picture that is free of mans building and taking over of nature another sought of way we self-destruct. Very true it speaks of a possible end to our existence.
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I love the words but I would choose a picture that is free of mans building and taking over of nature another sought of way we self-destruct. Very true it speaks of a possible end to our existence.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from chasennov
Chapter 37 of the book Writings From the Heart Night comes "Creation Sleeps" This is an excellent chapter you have created here and I liked the guiding lines directing the will of God to all mortals. The question asked is a tricky one. Well done.
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Chapter 37 of the book Writings From the Heart Night comes "Creation Sleeps" This is an excellent chapter you have created here and I liked the guiding lines directing the will of God to all mortals. The question asked is a tricky one. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014