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Do You?

real short poem

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Comment from Eric1
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Excellent content for this competition, which in my opinion is really quite difficult, so it takes something special to take the readers eye at first glance, loved it!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
    thxs for your read and for this great review. Glad you liked it
Comment from Angel Debbie
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FEW

ADMIT WHEN WRONG, SO DO

YOU?

We are all sinners in God's eyes.


Nice write good luck in the 1-6-1 contest!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
    We all may be sinners in God's eyes but he isn't sitting across from us at the dinner table, glaring. lol
Comment from Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest

your syllable count and rhyme spot on

your few words ask do you admit when wrong as so few do

cheers..Smoothiecool
yes

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
    thxs for your time to read and for your review
reply by Smoothiecool on 23-Jun-2014
    most welcome..SC
Comment from jmdg1954
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Yes! Most times.

Nicely written 1-6-1. All rules complied with, syllable counts, rhyming. Story well told in a few words and made sense. Nothing was forced to fit.

Best of luck in the contest... John

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
    thxs for your read and for your review