Believe In Love
get BLITZed!-Contest Entry35 total reviews
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
GREAT JOB.THIS MAKES ME BELIEVE THIS BLITZ POETRY THING IS DO-ABLE BUT I FEEL IT INVOLVES A LOT OF WORK. LOVELY THEME.LOVELY IMAGERY.WELL WRITTEN. APPEARS TO HAVE CONFORMED TO THE RULES STRICTLY.WELL DONE!
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GREAT JOB.THIS MAKES ME BELIEVE THIS BLITZ POETRY THING IS DO-ABLE BUT I FEEL IT INVOLVES A LOT OF WORK. LOVELY THEME.LOVELY IMAGERY.WELL WRITTEN. APPEARS TO HAVE CONFORMED TO THE RULES STRICTLY.WELL DONE!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, Michael, you did an excellent job writing this blitz poem, this seems like an interesting and hard format to do, I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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this is very well written, Michael, you did an excellent job writing this blitz poem, this seems like an interesting and hard format to do, I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from acerisestory
Your poem is amazingly well written, Michael! It seems incredibly difficult, yet you make it appear easy.
I love your stream of thought and the lovely images you've created in the process.
Good luck in the contest! Alana
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Your poem is amazingly well written, Michael! It seems incredibly difficult, yet you make it appear easy.
I love your stream of thought and the lovely images you've created in the process.
Good luck in the contest! Alana
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from NurseBarb
Michael this shows incredible talent to pull this one off so beautifully and staying with the strict guidelines. This actually looks like it would be really fun to write. I may try this one day. This entry may scare others away. lol It's that good!
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Michael this shows incredible talent to pull this one off so beautifully and staying with the strict guidelines. This actually looks like it would be really fun to write. I may try this one day. This entry may scare others away. lol It's that good!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Michael - I have read a few Blitz poems but have never tried it. I particularly like this one because you have not just followed the rules but your words make sense and consequently it becomes a good read. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
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Hi Michael - I have read a few Blitz poems but have never tried it. I particularly like this one because you have not just followed the rules but your words make sense and consequently it becomes a good read. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
You feel loss of love and a hold lot of bad feelings come rolling in. You lose hope. Everything may seem dangerous. You seek deceit every where you turn. You heart does not give up. It seeks adventure. You have hope. The sun shines again. The moon never looks more beautiful. You find love again. I love the pictures and the poem. Great work.
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You feel loss of love and a hold lot of bad feelings come rolling in. You lose hope. Everything may seem dangerous. You seek deceit every where you turn. You heart does not give up. It seeks adventure. You have hope. The sun shines again. The moon never looks more beautiful. You find love again. I love the pictures and the poem. Great work.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from Ekim777
Many poets fall back on repetitions which are often clumsy and misplaced. Our poet has created a repetitive poem which is as smooth as a chain of thought; profound thought. It is an uncanny poem where every phrase and word falls into place and the tension is not lost. It seems that our poet loves the English language. Fine work. -Ekim777
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Many poets fall back on repetitions which are often clumsy and misplaced. Our poet has created a repetitive poem which is as smooth as a chain of thought; profound thought. It is an uncanny poem where every phrase and word falls into place and the tension is not lost. It seems that our poet loves the English language. Fine work. -Ekim777
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from adewpearl
the rules for this form make me dizzy, so I'm trusting that you followed them - if you didn't, shame on you LOL
I like the way your thoughts trigger other thoughts in a way I like this style poem to unfold
Brooke :-)
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the rules for this form make me dizzy, so I'm trusting that you followed them - if you didn't, shame on you LOL
I like the way your thoughts trigger other thoughts in a way I like this style poem to unfold
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from rrabinow
Wonderful blitz poem that you have written for this prompt. I like how your poem flows nicely from line to line. I also like that your poem is about love. I like how you put your poem in between two pictures. Best of luck.
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Wonderful blitz poem that you have written for this prompt. I like how your poem flows nicely from line to line. I also like that your poem is about love. I like how you put your poem in between two pictures. Best of luck.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Michael: I would give you a ten. This poem challenge was hard so I skipped it. I appreciate you and your expressions of love. Well written with you out of the box youthful thoughts of love. Gold stars on love!
flylikeaneagle
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Michael: I would give you a ten. This poem challenge was hard so I skipped it. I appreciate you and your expressions of love. Well written with you out of the box youthful thoughts of love. Gold stars on love!
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014