Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a wild and crazy stream-of-consciousness poem in this wild and crazy form. It seems to follow all the directions of the prompt. Good luck to you, Jeanie

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014

Thanks, Jeanie. It is a wild and crazy form, challenging with some unusual rules. Keeping to a theme is difficult as the direction of ideas and story line can run amok or stray with twists and turns. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o) Art

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, starkat, I admire anybody that attempts one of these blitz poems. I have to admit the title caught my eye. nothing worse than getting sick on vacation. good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014

thank, swj - blitz poem are challenging, but can be fun to write - appreciate your comments ... ;) starkat