Writings From the Heart
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Comment from DALLAS01
For many of us, lucky ones, the closest we have ever come to experiencing such trauma, is in he reading of its horror, as you have so vividly depicted in this poem.
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For many of us, lucky ones, the closest we have ever come to experiencing such trauma, is in he reading of its horror, as you have so vividly depicted in this poem.
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thank you for reading Dallas
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Comment from lynglyng
What a wonderfully written poem. Done with professional quality. You really captured feel of emotions with your word choices. I enjoyed reading!
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What a wonderfully written poem. Done with professional quality. You really captured feel of emotions with your word choices. I enjoyed reading!
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thank you lynglyng
Comment from billscott
Heart wrenching account most assuredly.
Loved the feel and emotion playing out, developing into a shred of hope.
Excellent account and use of poetic phrases.
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Heart wrenching account most assuredly.
Loved the feel and emotion playing out, developing into a shred of hope.
Excellent account and use of poetic phrases.
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thank you
Comment from Chrisluca
This poem gave me chills. I remember stories from my Grandfather before he sent my Grandmother to the States. He stayed behind and lived out the horror. Very well done.
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This poem gave me chills. I remember stories from my Grandfather before he sent my Grandmother to the States. He stayed behind and lived out the horror. Very well done.
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thank you for this
Comment from artisart4u
Your poem flows very well from point to point.
It is historical and memorable. The sirens probably would stick in my head, like the days when I was young and we had air raids.
Good luck with your poem.
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Your poem flows very well from point to point.
It is historical and memorable. The sirens probably would stick in my head, like the days when I was young and we had air raids.
Good luck with your poem.
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thank you
Comment from l.raven
Hi deepwater, hard to forget...we are still going through it...only in different ways...I hate war...I hate the innocent being bombed...for what reason???...this is a touching poem...tears...story well told...reminder of once was...very well written...picture heart breaking...Luff Linda xxoo
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Hi deepwater, hard to forget...we are still going through it...only in different ways...I hate war...I hate the innocent being bombed...for what reason???...this is a touching poem...tears...story well told...reminder of once was...very well written...picture heart breaking...Luff Linda xxoo
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Thank you Linda
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you are so welcome...I wish I would of had a six for this one...******...they truly don't give us enough...sigh...
Comment from MM lives on :)
Your pucture truly draws the reader into your
poem Deepwater..you did an excellent job
keeping the readers att as well throughout
the read..thanks for sharing always a pleasure
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Your pucture truly draws the reader into your
poem Deepwater..you did an excellent job
keeping the readers att as well throughout
the read..thanks for sharing always a pleasure
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Thank you
Comment from risktaker
Very vivid portrayal of the events that happened. The photo is outstanding. I like the flow, tone, and structure. I feel the fear, anxiety, and hear the chaos. "I relate to man can survive every turmoil and strife." What a blessing to get threw the terrorizing situation. thanks
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Very vivid portrayal of the events that happened. The photo is outstanding. I like the flow, tone, and structure. I feel the fear, anxiety, and hear the chaos. "I relate to man can survive every turmoil and strife." What a blessing to get threw the terrorizing situation. thanks
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Thank you
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Comment from Drew Delaney
A sad, sad story. Shelter in a cupboard under the stairs. Such is war. Innocents living nightmares and live to tell. You did a wonderful job writing about this horror. I hope it never happens again. But it is in some places in the world. How much more sad, when we know this is going on.
And nothing we can do but pray.
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A sad, sad story. Shelter in a cupboard under the stairs. Such is war. Innocents living nightmares and live to tell. You did a wonderful job writing about this horror. I hope it never happens again. But it is in some places in the world. How much more sad, when we know this is going on.
And nothing we can do but pray.
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Thank you
Comment from jaydub99
Great imagery and flow in a poem that had great passion. My mother also lived through the blitz as a young girl. Your photo gave another level of depth to a piece that has it all. Cadence, great use of language and promise. Outstanding.
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Great imagery and flow in a poem that had great passion. My mother also lived through the blitz as a young girl. Your photo gave another level of depth to a piece that has it all. Cadence, great use of language and promise. Outstanding.
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Thank you