Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Awkward"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
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Comment from adewpearl
a solid acrostic for Awkward
good use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
good alliteration in demise of dignity
you capture well the essence of a socially awkward, clumsy moment
Brooke
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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a solid acrostic for Awkward
good use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
good alliteration in demise of dignity
you capture well the essence of a socially awkward, clumsy moment
Brooke
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Thank you Brooke, for this kind and encouraging review!
Comment from kiwijenny
I have plenty of these moments....my husband says I don't put my foot in my mouth I just take it out occasionally ....ha ha ha ha
Well written .i like this acrostic
God bless
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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I have plenty of these moments....my husband says I don't put my foot in my mouth I just take it out occasionally ....ha ha ha ha
Well written .i like this acrostic
God bless
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Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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I know what you mean.. Thank you for this kind and encouraging review!