Tall Tales and Short Stories
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Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your two line six syllable portrays well a good night sleep is the best essence and a blessing
good internal and end rhyme not forced
cheers Smoothiecool
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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good luck in the contest
your two line six syllable portrays well a good night sleep is the best essence and a blessing
good internal and end rhyme not forced
cheers Smoothiecool
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thanks SC for the great comments and best wishes. :-)
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most welcome..SC