Upon Newfound Eyes
Shakespearean Sonnet18 total reviews
Comment from Jose Saic
Beautiful verses that with a great tenderness give the images of a holy birthday, the meaning of a new life of a child that will never dim and will give the light to humans.
I like very much this poem.
Congratulations.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2014
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Beautiful verses that with a great tenderness give the images of a holy birthday, the meaning of a new life of a child that will never dim and will give the light to humans.
I like very much this poem.
Congratulations.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2014
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Hat is a truly truly great compliment. I thank you my friend. Truly. And thank you for the six stars!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dr. Nad
I need to tell you how much I enjoyed your poem "Upon New found Eyes". One of the things I would say about it is that it is very inspirational. From the beginning into the middle and on through the end. The Christ Child is a subject that is familiar to all of us and one we can't ignore:.
"Oh Holy Child your light will never dim,
for you are home wherever glory lives"
We have all had a few times when things were tough but God just placed a big blessing in our lap. Thanks for sharing. May God bless You.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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I need to tell you how much I enjoyed your poem "Upon New found Eyes". One of the things I would say about it is that it is very inspirational. From the beginning into the middle and on through the end. The Christ Child is a subject that is familiar to all of us and one we can't ignore:.
"Oh Holy Child your light will never dim,
for you are home wherever glory lives"
We have all had a few times when things were tough but God just placed a big blessing in our lap. Thanks for sharing. May God bless You.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Thanks so much!
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Sorry to be late with this, I have been incredibly busy for the past week.
You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is wonderful. The entire package is wonderful from the font, color, background and image. The star is the poem. Wonderful word choices and I love emotion in the message here.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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This is wonderful. The entire package is wonderful from the font, color, background and image. The star is the poem. Wonderful word choices and I love emotion in the message here.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Hello Michael. Thank you!
Comment from royowen
This is a nice sonnet, the language is beautifully composed and expressed the syllable count is accurate, except for 1st stanza, line blessed or is it bless-ed, you should stress the word, the rhyming has too proximates, (imperfect rhymes) this has great potential with a little tightening, I loved it, very well written, just needs a little work! Ever since I joined the site 12 months ago, it's made a big difference to my writing, blessings and welcome! Roy.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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This is a nice sonnet, the language is beautifully composed and expressed the syllable count is accurate, except for 1st stanza, line blessed or is it bless-ed, you should stress the word, the rhyming has too proximates, (imperfect rhymes) this has great potential with a little tightening, I loved it, very well written, just needs a little work! Ever since I joined the site 12 months ago, it's made a big difference to my writing, blessings and welcome! Roy.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Hello Roy. Thank you so much!
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My pleasure
Comment from robina1978
I smiled when you wrote you forgot you are a member if the site:) Did nobody impress you? This English Sonnet sounds nice, the art complements it very well. Lovely picture that complements your poem very well.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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I smiled when you wrote you forgot you are a member if the site:) Did nobody impress you? This English Sonnet sounds nice, the art complements it very well. Lovely picture that complements your poem very well.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Thanks so much!
Comment from l.raven
OH Gregory, what a wonderful poem about the journey of being a father...and if it is for you...Congratulation...they are truly miracles of God...I love every word....beautiful....and the picture precious...so very nicely written sweetie...Luff Linda xxoo love...so good to see you...
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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OH Gregory, what a wonderful poem about the journey of being a father...and if it is for you...Congratulation...they are truly miracles of God...I love every word....beautiful....and the picture precious...so very nicely written sweetie...Luff Linda xxoo love...so good to see you...
Comment Written 08-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Hello! I'm sorry it has taken me so long! I miss you. Thank you so very much for this! I'm so honored. Children are miracles. Really, thank you very much. It's an honor.
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really I have missed you...so glad to see you again Gregory, and you are always soooo welcome...Love ya you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Selina Stambi
Excellent iambs and pentameter.
Beautiful sonnet - written from your heart.
Gregory, congratulations on becoming a Dad. What a noble promotion!
God bless you. Hope you're doing well. So glad to bump into you this evening before I wind up for the day.
Sonali :)
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Excellent iambs and pentameter.
Beautiful sonnet - written from your heart.
Gregory, congratulations on becoming a Dad. What a noble promotion!
God bless you. Hope you're doing well. So glad to bump into you this evening before I wind up for the day.
Sonali :)
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Hello Sonali! Thank you so much for reading. I'm sorry it took so long to get back. I've been away with my son. I truly appreciate you reading this. Miss you. I'll be back soon!
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Fatherhood comes first, Gregory. Enjoy every blessed moment of it.
Comment from Curly Girly
This appears to be a well written and thought-out sonnet. The world, as seen through the eyes of a babe. It is good when fathers take an interest in their offspring, particularly their son's.
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This appears to be a well written and thought-out sonnet. The world, as seen through the eyes of a babe. It is good when fathers take an interest in their offspring, particularly their son's.
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Thank you!