Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Reconciled...

And so we pick ourselves up and carry as we endeavor to make sense of the adversity, learn from it, and then move on.

Nice touch, adding the music.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*;*)


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 Comment Written 28-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015

Hi Jax....-smile- thank you Dear...happy you enjoyed....love Bug-

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I always relish your references, like the wordplay with "crime seen" and "piped pipers". I enjoyed your rhymes and conclusion with the "insane human being". We are all at least eccentric! Blithering- Joan

P.S. If you have a moment, read my recent, very short "Mister Malaprop," which you'll get a kick out of at my husband's expense!

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 Comment Written 28-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015

Hi J....-smile-...lol...eccentric is fun....crazy is a loaded gun...BANG!...wha...BAng! Hey...Joan....lol.....love Bug-