Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Choosing the right door is paramount. The door of salvation to his amazing grace. Great picture and very nice rhyme throughout. Well done.

Janet

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings.................

Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

I like the way you start out with a warning to be careful what you wish for. I like the progression of the message. You could improve the rhyme a bit and it would be great.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015

Thanks so much for your review and kind comments. Blessings........................

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

There is some fascinating approximate rhyme here that is the making of this poem. As far as the content is concerned Ib would like to know how these doors will be presented to us and how shall we recognize them. The poems does not go into that important aspect.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015

Thanks so much for your review, greatly appreciated. I am so sorry that it was not clear for you, I was speaking of two doors. Door number one in the first stanza tells that behind this door lurks evil and darkness and warns one not to open.

The following stanza tells the reader about the door to eternal life through Jesus Christ and salvation. By this being written as an acrostic poem and utilizing the title "Behind the Door" as my title, I was so praying that I made the message clear. I am so sorry it wasn't clear for you. I thank you for not skipping and giving it a read and your time. Blessings............................

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

A good acrostic and a worthy entry into the contest. Some good rhyme throughout and the message in your poem is well thought out. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings....................

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I wish I had a six for this...I love this amazing grace kind of poem
Behind the door ...what a great prompt...and you nailed it my friend
Well penned indeed
God bless..@@@@@@

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015

Thanks so much for this stunning review, and very kind comments. Blessings....................

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This acrostic poem does a nice job of viewing us as the bride of Christ and making the desire to commune forever in that loving environment a driving purpose for our existence here. Nice.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015

Thanks so much for your review and kind comments. Blessings

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

'Beware of what (your) seek. I think you mean (you).

This is very well written and it spells out the contest name as well, I like that. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015

Thanks so much for your very kind comments and best wishes. I really appreciate you bringing this error to my attention. It's amazing how I was unable to see this simple error as I read this over and over before releasing. Thanks again my friend..................................Blessings

Comment from JanPerry

Excellent

Very well set out. The picture is very powerful running to heaven. Good wording and acrostic sense.
Wish the blue was a lighter colour, it detracts from the work.
Nicely done.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015

Thanks so much my friend for your review and kind comments. I did as you suggested and made the background just a lighter blue instead of navy blue. Blessings..................................

reply by JanPerry on 31-Aug-2015

cool

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This is a very good entry into the competition. Many times these acrostics come across as disjointed and jarring. You have managed to avoid this skilfully.

Good luck in the contest.
GMG

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings

Comment from anabellapongasi

Excellent

This is a wonderful entry to this Behind the Door contest. Nicely done in acrostic too. You did a great job of delivering a great spiritual message within the limits of the beginning letters of each line. Nicely done. Best to you in the contest.
Blessings,
Anabella

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings............................