Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Bedroom Eyes"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from Zue65
This really sounds like an excellent lyrical song. The repetition of specific stanzas is actually effective and it made the message clearer. The technique also amplified the message the author intends for the readers. Thanks for sharing an excellent write. God bless.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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This really sounds like an excellent lyrical song. The repetition of specific stanzas is actually effective and it made the message clearer. The technique also amplified the message the author intends for the readers. Thanks for sharing an excellent write. God bless.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. Mama never told me about those bedroom eyes either. Some things you just have to find out for yourself.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. Mama never told me about those bedroom eyes either. Some things you just have to find out for yourself.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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My pleasure
Comment from Joyce Long
Great lyrics. I can feel the words flow as I read. Very well done. Yes, there seems to be many things that aren't passed on and we have to learn the hard way. This country song is GREAT! and should go well in your book. Best of luck. Like most country song--the girl got away. My guy didn't get away, so I'm lucky. I have several friends who can sing these sad songs.
Very well done.
Merry Christmas
Joyce 12-19-15
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Great lyrics. I can feel the words flow as I read. Very well done. Yes, there seems to be many things that aren't passed on and we have to learn the hard way. This country song is GREAT! and should go well in your book. Best of luck. Like most country song--the girl got away. My guy didn't get away, so I'm lucky. I have several friends who can sing these sad songs.
Very well done.
Merry Christmas
Joyce 12-19-15
Comment Written 19-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Comment from chcbeck
Again a great piece, In answer to your question I don't believe if mamma did tell you about them bedroom eyes, things would have turned out differently, as I think like love there's something you cant control despite being warned about.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Again a great piece, In answer to your question I don't believe if mamma did tell you about them bedroom eyes, things would have turned out differently, as I think like love there's something you cant control despite being warned about.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Comment from PoemsOfDD
Brett MW, this is s good written piece. It conjures up a vivid imagery of falling for the wrong girl and ending up with a broken heart. Poor mother is to blame for leaving certain stones to sit unturned. An enjoyable free style lyric. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Brett MW, this is s good written piece. It conjures up a vivid imagery of falling for the wrong girl and ending up with a broken heart. Poor mother is to blame for leaving certain stones to sit unturned. An enjoyable free style lyric. Nicely done!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2015
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Comment from GE Parson
...Oh Heaven was in your eyes but the Devil was in your heart
And I'll never love blue eyes again
The eyes of the blind often see more than the eyes of the seeing.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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...Oh Heaven was in your eyes but the Devil was in your heart
And I'll never love blue eyes again
The eyes of the blind often see more than the eyes of the seeing.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2015
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Comment from Teri7
My friend I have been accused of having those bedroom eyes and it never stopped a guy from looking my way. That is an honest answer. This is a great poem but I didn't use mine to hurt men. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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My friend I have been accused of having those bedroom eyes and it never stopped a guy from looking my way. That is an honest answer. This is a great poem but I didn't use mine to hurt men. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 17-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Comment from William Ross
very good, well written and versed great job on this. Mamma never told me but Pappa told me to watch out for sure, Great job, nicely done.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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very good, well written and versed great job on this. Mamma never told me but Pappa told me to watch out for sure, Great job, nicely done.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Comment from MelB
Ah yes, those bedroom eyes, that seem to drive a man crazy and make him willing to do anything. More mamas should warn their boys, I think! More great lyrics for a country song.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Ah yes, those bedroom eyes, that seem to drive a man crazy and make him willing to do anything. More mamas should warn their boys, I think! More great lyrics for a country song.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
This is a nice little song. You are so talented in writing all kinds of things. I enjoyed reading this very much. My friend had told me she was busy making a bedspread. It sure turned out nicely and it does go well with your song.
Kat
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Hi Brett,
This is a nice little song. You are so talented in writing all kinds of things. I enjoyed reading this very much. My friend had told me she was busy making a bedspread. It sure turned out nicely and it does go well with your song.
Kat
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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I could not resist using patcelaw's picture. She did a super job on that bedspread. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
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Yes, she did a great job on the bedspread.