Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "For Your Heartache Today"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
29 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
nice work Brett when I get a headache in order to try to alleviate it of course we could take an Advil or Tylenol or something similar but the best thing to do is to lay down and relax and just go to sleep and when you wake up it's always going to be gone nice work here thoroughly enjoyed thank you very much Ricky 10248
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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nice work Brett when I get a headache in order to try to alleviate it of course we could take an Advil or Tylenol or something similar but the best thing to do is to lay down and relax and just go to sleep and when you wake up it's always going to be gone nice work here thoroughly enjoyed thank you very much Ricky 10248
Comment Written 30-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Works for headaches, Ricky, but not sure that remedy will work for a heartache.
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Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. This is a beautiful poem. You're right, the picture is perfect for this poem. I enjoyed reading this piece. It is lovely and tells a rather sad story. Good work.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Excellent. This is a beautiful poem. You're right, the picture is perfect for this poem. I enjoyed reading this piece. It is lovely and tells a rather sad story. Good work.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Brett
this is so moving, to know you have lost the one person you love the most must be so very hard to endure. Sometimes we do not what we have until we destroy it.
Very sad but good read.
Brenda
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Hi Brett
this is so moving, to know you have lost the one person you love the most must be so very hard to endure. Sometimes we do not what we have until we destroy it.
Very sad but good read.
Brenda
Comment Written 30-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
So true. Some times you do not know what you have until you lose it.
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Comment from Janet Foor
Heartaches are real and they do hurt badly. The lyrics you have written will resonate with many if not everyone. This sounds like a great country song. Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Heartaches are real and they do hurt badly. The lyrics you have written will resonate with many if not everyone. This sounds like a great country song. Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 30-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Comment from Teri7
Brett, This is another touching song you have written. It is so full of the truth of the way things happen now days. I love the colors you chose for this and you had great rhyming. Good job. Teri
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Brett, This is another touching song you have written. It is so full of the truth of the way things happen now days. I love the colors you chose for this and you had great rhyming. Good job. Teri
Comment Written 28-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Comment from judiverse
Excellent words for your title. I can imagine this as a country song, maybe as told to a bartender. Anyhow, this guy admits he's made some mistakes, but he's trying to overcome his heartache and make her just a memory. It seems the gal is doing all right. She's found someone new, bur the narrator warns her that his love will fade. Excellent flow, and the word choices are just right for this type of lyric. Great work. judi
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
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Excellent words for your title. I can imagine this as a country song, maybe as told to a bartender. Anyhow, this guy admits he's made some mistakes, but he's trying to overcome his heartache and make her just a memory. It seems the gal is doing all right. She's found someone new, bur the narrator warns her that his love will fade. Excellent flow, and the word choices are just right for this type of lyric. Great work. judi
Comment Written 26-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Great song, I can imagine someone sitting in a bar on a barstool with his guitar singing this song over and over and the other men join in with the repeating refrain.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
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Great song, I can imagine someone sitting in a bar on a barstool with his guitar singing this song over and over and the other men join in with the repeating refrain.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2016
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Comment from Muffins
The language is tender. Its message is like the breathe between the words. The silence which allows time for reflection.
This hook:"And, the tears you cry tomorrow are for your heartache today," represents a broken heart in its purest form.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
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The language is tender. Its message is like the breathe between the words. The silence which allows time for reflection.
This hook:"And, the tears you cry tomorrow are for your heartache today," represents a broken heart in its purest form.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
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Comment from MizKat
Hi Bret,
Your poem is written very well, like always. The picture is really nice and as you say it goes nicely with your lyrics. Keep writing your poetry and I'll be here to read them.
Kat
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Hi Bret,
Your poem is written very well, like always. The picture is really nice and as you say it goes nicely with your lyrics. Keep writing your poetry and I'll be here to read them.
Kat
Comment Written 25-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Comment from MelB
Very good lyrics in this poem. Heartbreak or heartache is so awful to go through. It's so hard to get through it and move on. You have described it well in this poem.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Very good lyrics in this poem. Heartbreak or heartache is so awful to go through. It's so hard to get through it and move on. You have described it well in this poem.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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