Comment from
LisaD123
I enjoyed the way that the imagery is crafted here and the overall impression given to the reader. The mirroring of the lines in the opening and final stanza were very powerful. The alliteration and assonance makes the poem an interesting aural experience for the reader. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 07-May-2017
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
hey Lisa...-smile-
why thank you...I'm very happy with this...pleased you enjoyed it. love Michael