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Comment from Ricky1024
Michael I really enjoyed the depth of this piece this grieving poem the adjective and object the content were perfect descriptive measures kicked in to play the tune of grief I enjoyed the picture with the bird little birdie had a message to tell little birdie no longer exists for she went to a place that we all will know above that exist review by cell phone with running sent is no exclamation points by dr. Ricky 1024 still preaching to the choir according to see Lucas here at Fan story
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Michael I really enjoyed the depth of this piece this grieving poem the adjective and object the content were perfect descriptive measures kicked in to play the tune of grief I enjoyed the picture with the bird little birdie had a message to tell little birdie no longer exists for she went to a place that we all will know above that exist review by cell phone with running sent is no exclamation points by dr. Ricky 1024 still preaching to the choir according to see Lucas here at Fan story
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
Comment from MissMerri
This poem was such a delight to find this morning. It breathes and sings beauty and tenderness. As usual with your poetry, the words seem to be chosen and placed with exquisite care so that their sounds, both beginning and internal sounds, ring together in such a pleasing way, creating a music that moves any listening heart. I am moved, not just by the music I hear, but also by the sentiments expressed. There is a wistfulness, a delicate layering of emotion that is subtle yet touching. I feel it deeply, even while finding it elusive and mysterious... not readily explained. It is poetry and beauty and emotion braided together and tied with a bow. Beautiful work. A treat to read before breakfast. M.
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This poem was such a delight to find this morning. It breathes and sings beauty and tenderness. As usual with your poetry, the words seem to be chosen and placed with exquisite care so that their sounds, both beginning and internal sounds, ring together in such a pleasing way, creating a music that moves any listening heart. I am moved, not just by the music I hear, but also by the sentiments expressed. There is a wistfulness, a delicate layering of emotion that is subtle yet touching. I feel it deeply, even while finding it elusive and mysterious... not readily explained. It is poetry and beauty and emotion braided together and tied with a bow. Beautiful work. A treat to read before breakfast. M.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017