Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Sunrise well-written Mission teams laws imagery flood well right well no grammar issues of the speak adjective adjective contents were both excellent firmly in place prescripted measure the line perfectly thanks for this and good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Moondance echo sublime. Echidna profile review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a clever Limerick. A very unusual subject and union here and I really enjoyed it. Your little poem is well researched too! A unique Limerick, loved it! Love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Thanks for the lovely review, Dolly. Much appreciated - Craig

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Poor, Chris. He must've had some kind of scurvy or seawoozies or something to mistake manatees for mermaids. I'll bet those voyages were absolutely brutal beyond the imagination.

I like the sound of your new work. Manatine. Does that rhyme with tine or teen? Please say teen because that's a softer sound.

Excellent Limerick form too by the way. Odd coupling indeed, but these things happened in the raunchy crowd back in the day I hear.

Great job! I very much enjoy the surprise of a new work every day.

Gloria

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

I took it as "teen", rather than "tine." But never having heard it spoken, who knows?

Thanks again for the kind review, Gloria. Much appreciated :)

Craig