Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

A good question about extinction of the world and survival of cockroaches only, well used supervivants; then will cockroaches be only survivors, when all dead; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018

Thank you for the kind review, much appreciated - Craig

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I see you are at it again! Excellent. I like the new word you chose "supervivant". I really must find myself a copy of that book. I enjoy this fun task you have set for yourself. Thanks for sharing it with us!

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018

Thanks for the very kind words, much appreciated - Craig

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Cockroaches in charge. That would be weird. I hope it doesn't happen until I'm long gone. Good job with this word :) Good rhyming couplets. You could probably stick your words for the day in the middle of a line so you don't have to rhyme with it at all. Just a thought.

Joy xx

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018

Hi Joy - it is a good thought - and I've actually done that in five out of the twelve so far. A reminder doesn't hurt, though.

Many thanks for the kind words.

Craig

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting and well written poem you have penned Craig. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. Great job! Blessings, Teri

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018

Thanks for the kind assessment, Teri. Much appreciated - Craig

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Well if the cockroaches are ever completely wiped out God help us, they are the true survivors! (I can never kill the blighters! They are huge here!). Your poem is poignant, well rhymed and food for thought, I really enjoyed every line of your poem, love Dolly x

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018

Thanks for the lovely comments, Dolly. They are much appreciated :) Craig

Comment from James H. Oldfield

Excellent

I can't really fault that, excellent poem (in a tragic, terrifying way, obviously).

Don't think I'd change a thing, very well done.

Take care

-James

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018

Thanks very much for the kind comments, James. Much appreciated - Craig

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hello Craig. First of all I want to congratulate you on your choice of words today. Then I will say you have said a mouthful of wisdom in this write. Cockroaches King hey? I've seen them big enough to put leashes on and walk them like pets in PNG where I lived for a couple of years. Your words should stop people dead in their tracks for the truth of the state of our existence. Bravo! xxoo deborah

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 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018

Thanks very much for the lovely comments Kiwi :) PNG, you say. That must have been quite an experience - how did you find it? Cheers, Craig