Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I have to say, my friend, I have never heard that word before. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Great job! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Thanks very much, Teri. Neither have I, but that's what it's all about :) Much appreciated, Craig

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Delightful and fun, and you taught us another word! I'll be sure to use "twankle" the next time I talk to my musician friend. He'll no doubt be impressed.

I love how you twankled every where, and even while your Aunty watched. Of course the word that comes to mind is 'tinkled' and I'm sure your readers could come up with other verbs, all of which makes this so funny.

Perfect rhyming and nice smooth flow. A pleasure to read! Is that a picture of you tankling away? ~~ Connie

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 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

That is indeed me twankling on the path. No animals or plants were harmed. Many thanks for the lovely review, Connie :)

Cheers, Craig

reply by bichonfrisegirl on 01-Feb-2018

A very nice picture, Craig. Twankle on!

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a fun verse.
I like the rhythm and the rhyming. And the twankling.
Thank you for sharing this fun piece and the new word with us.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Thank you for the kind words :) Craig