A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
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Comment from tfawcus
Some clever and amusing rhymes in this are its making. I was drawn in by your title too. I have read a great many immodest limericks in my time but this is the first modest one!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Some clever and amusing rhymes in this are its making. I was drawn in by your title too. I have read a great many immodest limericks in my time but this is the first modest one!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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The more immodest the better! Thanks, Tony :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Limerick. If we do not promote ourselves or what we are able to do, no-one will ever know about our abilities. When we over promote we can stand ashamed when what we promote is not worthwhile.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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A very well-written Limerick. If we do not promote ourselves or what we are able to do, no-one will ever know about our abilities. When we over promote we can stand ashamed when what we promote is not worthwhile.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Both are very true, Sandra. Thanks for the thoughtful response. Craig
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
This is an exquisitely etched Limerick that reminisces how a man's unequalled show of craftiness and excellence in finding solutions to the problems of humanity could sometimes be perceived as a show of pride.
The does not only epitomise the protagonist's humility in carrying out his enterprise, but transparently conjures his having excelled beyond criticism.
The work earns its texture through the use of imagery.
Outstanding work! Unfortunately I do not now have the stars to award you. More of this, please. Keep the flag flying!
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This is an exquisitely etched Limerick that reminisces how a man's unequalled show of craftiness and excellence in finding solutions to the problems of humanity could sometimes be perceived as a show of pride.
The does not only epitomise the protagonist's humility in carrying out his enterprise, but transparently conjures his having excelled beyond criticism.
The work earns its texture through the use of imagery.
Outstanding work! Unfortunately I do not now have the stars to award you. More of this, please. Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Thank you very much for the kind words. Never mind about the stars, the lovely compliments are much appreciated - Craig
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, this is enjoyable reading and a clever limerick. And great use of the word, Barnumism ... which I have never heard of before, but in your author notes you fill in the gaps, and I think it is a great idea for your 'potpourri of poetic curiosities'...great name btw.
I will keep my eyes open for other chapters. Words are wonderful things, as you know, thanks for the poem, Ana.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Hello, this is enjoyable reading and a clever limerick. And great use of the word, Barnumism ... which I have never heard of before, but in your author notes you fill in the gaps, and I think it is a great idea for your 'potpourri of poetic curiosities'...great name btw.
I will keep my eyes open for other chapters. Words are wonderful things, as you know, thanks for the poem, Ana.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Thanks very much Ana. I was changing it just as you reviewed it, as I'm certain somebody would have taken it seriously! Most grateful for the kind comments. Craig
Comment from Pamusart
You and a few others I know, Craig. Sounds like a politician I know. You realize that I probably will not remember all these new words, don't you? Really flows effortlessly. Perfectly rhymed. Thank you for sharing
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You and a few others I know, Craig. Sounds like a politician I know. You realize that I probably will not remember all these new words, don't you? Really flows effortlessly. Perfectly rhymed. Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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I hope you are not comparing me to THAT politician, Pam! I've done nothing to deserve that lol Thanks muchly :) Craig
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Of course not, Craig. Not you. I hate this screen. I am can no longer see your post and if I click on it I will lose what I typed. I thought maybe the person in the poem might be like you know who
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Of course not, Craig. Not you. I hate this screen. I am can no longer see your post and if I click on it I will lose what I typed. I thought maybe the person in the poem might be like you know who
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LOL I know - I actually changed it, because it was written in first person, and I just KNOW someone would take it seriously :)
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Lol, Craig
Comment from rama devi
What a fun rhyme and word. How amazing Barnum got a word for his name. He was an interesting guy. Did you see the film?
Fine presentation with apt artwork. Good limerick style. Bouncy beat, clever rhyming.
Warmly,
rd
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What a fun rhyme and word. How amazing Barnum got a word for his name. He was an interesting guy. Did you see the film?
Fine presentation with apt artwork. Good limerick style. Bouncy beat, clever rhyming.
Warmly,
rd
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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I'm not sure, RD. I don't recall seeing a film about him in recent years, so if it's not an old one, then probably not. I may have seen something years and years ago, but I really don't have any sound recollection. Thanks for the kind review. :) Craig
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P.S. I changed it, as I'm absolutely certain someone would have taken it seriously :)
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