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A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities

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A collection of poems showcasing unusual words

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Comment from Alexander Vasa
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How did you manage to find that photo, the story is so specific, I'm wondering where you found it. Great word for the day, you do these very well. I saw no errors, the poem read smoothly and told a good tale, I'd recommend this to other readers for review, thanks Ana.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
    I found it by searching Google Images for "pug" :) Thanks very much, Ana, for the lovely review.
Comment from karenina
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As writing prompts go these cityscapes for the day cannot help but get creative juices flowing! Lighthearted and tongue in cheek this would make a pit bull smile!

Karenina

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
    Thanks very much for the kind comments, Karenina. Cheers, Craig
reply by karenina on 13-Apr-2018
    Welcome!
Comment from Pamusart
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Well, that makes sense. I mean the definition. Could be pug nose. Pugmuzzle. But I guess a nozzle is slang for a nose. Better than a pugnoggin. Which must be bigger since it is the entire head. Sorry. Off on a tangent. Nice poem. I will believe you when pugs can fly. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
    Of course pugs can fly! Especially in New Zealand ;-)

    Many thanks,
    Craig
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a tale of an unusual dog that wanted to fly and contacted a vet who tried for making a miracle to help the dog fly, and once it started flying the dream ends; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
    Thanks for the kind review. Craig
Comment from Ricky1024
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This was richly written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
    Thanks very much for reviewing. Craig