Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem with lots of great descriptive words and very good imagery from your words as well. Very enjoyable read! Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018

Thanks very much, Teri. Your support is very much appreciated. Craig

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

I love the message in this poem, Craig. Man can be so arrogant, thinking that he is the most important thing in the universe. We had best smarten up, or we will be our own demise.

I especially love this stanza:

"Will all our dreams come crashing down?
Is mankind just a shooting star?
A passing fad? A minor glitch?
A phantom blip on God's radar?"

Strong concluding line! Great job on this, Craig! And another new word learned. ~~ Connie

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018

Thanks very much for the wonderful review, Connie. I hope it isn't too late to smarten up! Cheers, Craig