Comment from
Jacob David Collins
The thoughts that came to my mind as I was reading your piece, was that we are becoming wholly reliant on technology, when skilled workers, who provide an essential service aren't being praised highly enough for the work they do. This was an interesting piece to read and I thought that your writing flowed smoothly. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
Thanks very much for the kind remarks, I'm glad you enjoyed. Craig
Comment from
Ogden
A very amusing and well-written example of your poetic prowess, Craig. And educational, too. (I suggest you add the definition of "theodolite" to your notes.)
Don
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
Definition added. Thanks very much, Don. Cheers, Craig
reply by Ogden on 21-Oct-2018
You're welcome, Craig.
Don
Comment from
tfawcus
Without their skill, the autostrada of Italy would, no doubt, have been as squiggly as a string of spaghetti. Some creative rhyming in this one eg guess/GPS.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
Thanks very much, Tony. Most grateful for the kind remarks. Craig