Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hah!
Well, Bill, this is a hoot! And I know hoots!
That darn Dean! What else can I say? He surely loves the macabre. But your poem has wit and honesty...and I thoroughly enjoyed it. (I bet Dean enjoyed it as well!)
Thank you for the smile! And who knows? You may just win!

diane

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Roadkill.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is fun. Sometimes I've entered a prompt contest, only to discover that Dean has entered later, and I get that sinking feeling that you describe. Great line about your grossest scenes becoming like a bandaged toe in comparison to the Master's. I know that feeling of lying like roadkill. I enjoyed this and understand the plight very well. On the other hand, Dean probably isn't going to be writing about wallabies. Excellent work with your rhyme, and best of luck. judi

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Thanks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 22-Oct-2018

You're welcome. judi

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

LOL, this is great, Bill. There is no beating Dean in the horror category and you are now roadkill, which of course I know you are not, but maybe the Contest Committee prefers something one the much diluted horror genre than the real hard core material.

Great job Bill and I wish you much luck with the Committee. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Entering a contest with Dean is like taking the 'learn to swim' cruise on the Titanic.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Cute and realistic. Hard to beat Dean in his favorite category! :)

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compared to Mr. Kuch's augmented gore<--Fixed

in impact, mine[,] would compare <-- Delete comma.
in impact, mine would compare as a dud<--Fixed

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Thanks, Phyllis. All fixed.

Comment from frogbook

Exceptional

HAHAHA. a VERY CLEVER RENDITION OF WHAT HAPPENS TO MANY OF US WHEN THE MASTER INTERVENVES. REALLY GREAT RHYMING AND AN ENJOYABLE READ.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Thanks, FB

Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

LOL... I love this, truth in the poem that's for sure... I like unique way you take on this Halloween poetry contest, I do believe I will vote for this one :-) well done Bill!
Judy

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Thanks, Judy

Comment from blkkatwriting

Excellent

Very clever and a lot of fun to read. Imagery all over the place. The subject is spooky and you certainly chose the right words to bring forth the creepiness of the season. Well done. Fast and paced like a rushing heartbeat. I enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Thanks, BK

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

haha This was humorous whether you intended that or not, Bill. Good job with your contest entry. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes. I believe Den will understand this was written in fun. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Thanks, Jan

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Bill, this is such a fun and creative verse to poke at Dean. He is very good, isn't he?? I hope your pun goes a long way to encourage everyone to enter this contest. when he steps forward, the competition goes up a scary notch. You did a great job with the format and rhyming. Good job.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Thanks, Sugarray

Comment from Michele Harber

Excellent

I enjoyed this very much. It's funny and well-written, and your rhymes all work well. I've lost contests to Dean myself in the past. I happen to be entered in the Halloween Poetry Contest as well - so now I have a chance to lose to both of you!! ;-)

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Thanks, Michelle, but the only way to lose to me is by not entering.

reply by Michele Harber on 22-Oct-2018

You're selling yourself short. I enjoyed the poem, and regulars on the site, who are familiar with Dean's work, will appreciate it as well.