The French Letter
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Comment from estory
The plot thickens. Drug smuggling seems to be what is tying this whole mafia interest to Helen and Durand, and now Charles is mixed up in it. More trouble could be brewing. I think the dialogue is crisp and the personalities of the characters comes out fine in it. I think you have a pretty nicely developed, interesting character here in Charles; He has that connessieur's eye for fine food, beautiful women, and good wine. It adds significant personality to the writing and makes this kind of unique. estory
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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The plot thickens. Drug smuggling seems to be what is tying this whole mafia interest to Helen and Durand, and now Charles is mixed up in it. More trouble could be brewing. I think the dialogue is crisp and the personalities of the characters comes out fine in it. I think you have a pretty nicely developed, interesting character here in Charles; He has that connessieur's eye for fine food, beautiful women, and good wine. It adds significant personality to the writing and makes this kind of unique. estory
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Thanks for your generous comments about the development of Charles?s character. As always, I appreciate your review. All the best, Tony
Comment from apky
Abit of trouble in paradise here, it seems. Or maybe just the familiar disagreement between the loved and the loving.
In any case, this journey and story continue to intrigue. The characters still have a fair journal ahead of them. And so does this reader. Can't wait for the next post.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Abit of trouble in paradise here, it seems. Or maybe just the familiar disagreement between the loved and the loving.
In any case, this journey and story continue to intrigue. The characters still have a fair journal ahead of them. And so does this reader. Can't wait for the next post.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Thanks, apky. You?re right. There may be a road bump or two in the avenue of true love. All the best, Tony.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter. Madame Durand has a kind of fit at the airport and it seems the trip will be delayed for a while. Until the cause of the collapse is found.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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A very well-written chapter. Madame Durand has a kind of fit at the airport and it seems the trip will be delayed for a while. Until the cause of the collapse is found.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Thanks for your time to review this chapter, Sandra. Appreciated. Tony
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Tony;
>I wonder what those marks were on Jeanne's chest that that was supposedly self-inflicted?
>How Helen is so irritated with Charles that every thing that Charles does seems to upset Helen even to the humorous retort of sticking out her tongue.
>I thought that This part of the story was a little bit slow but the information was very important is to feeling out the relationship between Helen and Charles at that point and Charles wondering why Ms Durrand for so conveniently generous with so much gratuities towards Helen for the story.
> Thanks for sharing, Tony, take care and have a good one.
Alx
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Cheers, Tony;
>I wonder what those marks were on Jeanne's chest that that was supposedly self-inflicted?
>How Helen is so irritated with Charles that every thing that Charles does seems to upset Helen even to the humorous retort of sticking out her tongue.
>I thought that This part of the story was a little bit slow but the information was very important is to feeling out the relationship between Helen and Charles at that point and Charles wondering why Ms Durrand for so conveniently generous with so much gratuities towards Helen for the story.
> Thanks for sharing, Tony, take care and have a good one.
Alx
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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As always, I enjoy reading your comments, Alex. Many thanks for the review. Best wishes, Tony.
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You're very welcome, Tony.
Alx
Comment from webfoot
I like the way you presented this. It reads like a very interesting novel. Your dialogue is professionally done and flows.
I have a desire to read your book :)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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I like the way you presented this. It reads like a very interesting novel. Your dialogue is professionally done and flows.
I have a desire to read your book :)
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Very kind of you to take the time to review my work, Webfoot. Thank you. Best wishes,Tony.
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welcome, tfawcus. i'll be taking the plunge soon and posting my novel - good to see how you did it
Comment from Ulla
Hahahaha, Tony I love it, so he got his own back on Helen. It serves her right I would have to say. But what now? They seem to be stuck in Paris and that could prove rather risky. I'm still intrigued with the Bangkok connection. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Hahahaha, Tony I love it, so he got his own back on Helen. It serves her right I would have to say. But what now? They seem to be stuck in Paris and that could prove rather risky. I'm still intrigued with the Bangkok connection. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Yes, I think they are running just about even now in the trading of insults! Many thanks for your award of six stars for this chapter. Most affirming and appreciated. All the best, Tony.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
As usual you have left me with more questions than answers. That will ensure I return to read more. LOL I do enjoy the story.
Dr Dupont motioned us to sit down in chairs opposite him. (you can omit 'down')
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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As usual you have left me with more questions than answers. That will ensure I return to read more. LOL I do enjoy the story.
Dr Dupont motioned us to sit down in chairs opposite him. (you can omit 'down')
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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Thanks very much, Barbara, for your kind words and six star review. I appreciate your suggested edit and have made the change. How easily these redundant words creep in under the radar!
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Tony,
Oh, I love how you interlace French into your story! The intrigue of the journal and these characters are just too much to turn away from. I always look forward to the next part. Your dialogue and prose work well together to weave this tale.
I do wonder 'what's in it for Jeanne?' Will we find out, I wonder. Just have to keep reading.
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story,
~MP~
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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Hi, Tony,
Oh, I love how you interlace French into your story! The intrigue of the journal and these characters are just too much to turn away from. I always look forward to the next part. Your dialogue and prose work well together to weave this tale.
I do wonder 'what's in it for Jeanne?' Will we find out, I wonder. Just have to keep reading.
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story,
~MP~
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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Once again, I can't thank you enough for your continued interest and encouragement, Patty. Knowing how skilled you are in your own story writing, it is always an honour to receive a six star rating from you. Very many thanks. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from giraffmang
I love the point of view in this. Charles is very funny and has a great turn of phrase.
Why, I wondered, did it always have to rain when I was on my way to meet Helen? Apparently, there is no cheese induced sunshine after dark - just the growling prospect of nightmares.- this is just one example of one of the things I really like about your writing. The cheese reference earlier could have stayed there, but frequently you continue it on, but always in keeping and appropriate. It's a sign of good writing and gives a cohesiveness, consistency and fluidity to the write.
Another superlative instalment.
G
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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I love the point of view in this. Charles is very funny and has a great turn of phrase.
Why, I wondered, did it always have to rain when I was on my way to meet Helen? Apparently, there is no cheese induced sunshine after dark - just the growling prospect of nightmares.- this is just one example of one of the things I really like about your writing. The cheese reference earlier could have stayed there, but frequently you continue it on, but always in keeping and appropriate. It's a sign of good writing and gives a cohesiveness, consistency and fluidity to the write.
Another superlative instalment.
G
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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I can't thank you enough for your continued interest and encouragement, Gareth. Knowing how skilled you are in your own story writing, it is a great boost to my confidence as a writer when I receive a six star rating from you. Very many thanks. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Mastery
Well written as usual, Tony. I must say, there is a natural sounding flow of the narrative, but I was thrown at one point by the use of French. I am only a single language writer. LOL Good job, Bob
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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Well written as usual, Tony. I must say, there is a natural sounding flow of the narrative, but I was thrown at one point by the use of French. I am only a single language writer. LOL Good job, Bob
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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I can't thank you enough for your continued interest and encouragement, Bob. Knowing how skilled you are in your own story writing, it is a great boost to my confidence as a writer when I receive a six star rating from you. Very many thanks. The French is there to impart a bit of local flavour. I confine it to greetings, exclamations, etc.,, which do not affect the story-line or, in cases like this one - Charles's order given to the waiter - there is a paraphrase of the meaning given in English. Best wishes, Tony