Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Haaaaa, alas poor Yorick I knew him well. No, seriously. Truer words were never written, Craig. Some people acting is just playing but that's only them who have never done it. It ain't as easy as it looks, like most things.

I'm glad to know exsibilation is a real word and thanks for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018

I kind of like this word. Not really sure what the attraction is, maybe something to do with the phonetics - the "hissing" sound of the "exs..." I'm certain there's a word for that, but it escapes me for the moment. Many thanks, Gloria.

Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

I like the rhythm and pace that compliments both the structure, and the message here which closely relates to a short story with the gradual events of the actor. A well thought out piece.

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 Comment Written 27-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018

Thanks very much for the kind comments. Appreciated :) Craig

Comment from Kelly Grim

Excellent

Cute little poem (limerick?) making use of your word of the day! Love how the audience turns on him once he starts to act... and of course he feels he's misunderstood! So good!

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 Comment Written 27-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018

Yes, a limerick :) Thanks very much for the positive comments, Kelly. Cheers, Craig