Comment from rama devi

Excellent

What a fun word. Fine use of it in this simple and effective poem. Nice presentation too. Fine medley of L sounds.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thanks so much, RD. Much appreciated :) Craig

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Oh, Craig, this is so good and the photograph really shows off the comparison of the frozen artic to a broken heart. Very emotive and well written. All the best,

Melissa

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thanks very much, Melissa. Most appreciated. Cheers, Craig.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Craig,

The entry you've penned for the three-line poetry contest is presented well, and I think the picture enhanced the feelings of being 'frozen out.'

Good luck to you in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thanks very much Patty, most grateful. Craig

Comment from Rene Ravensdale

Excellent

I read this, and a shiver ran through my body.
the cold of loneliness almost killing all happy feelings.
Thank you for sharing,
keep on the good writing!

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thanks very much for the thoughtful comments. Much appreciated. Craig

Comment from BlueTiger

Excellent

Great work on this poem! It's hard to do with only three lines, but you were able to build suspense in the first two lines and surprise in the last. I always enjoy well written short poems. Also learned a new word; best of luck on the contest.
-BT

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thanks very much for the most kind comments. I appreciate them greatly :) Craig