Where There's Love
share your love story29 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
Oh how sweet
This one is a winner in my book
It captured the love for his wife from the start those words touched my heart now that is what I call true love
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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Oh how sweet
This one is a winner in my book
It captured the love for his wife from the start those words touched my heart now that is what I call true love
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 01-May-2019
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is so beautiful in word, theme, and form. The blend of reality
and dream is appealingly conveyed. You have made excellent use of specific details and images.
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This is so beautiful in word, theme, and form. The blend of reality
and dream is appealingly conveyed. You have made excellent use of specific details and images.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very interesting poem especially if it is true. It is an excellent entry for the Love competition. I think it should do very well. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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This is a very interesting poem especially if it is true. It is an excellent entry for the Love competition. I think it should do very well. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
Comment from royowen
I have certainly heard that people have had "out of the body experiences" I think it's God's form of telling us, we are both loved, and are loved not only by Him, up the loved ones He given us. Well done my friend, thanks for sharing this fabulous story in a poem. Nicely written in no fixed meter and lots of rhyme, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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I have certainly heard that people have had "out of the body experiences" I think it's God's form of telling us, we are both loved, and are loved not only by Him, up the loved ones He given us. Well done my friend, thanks for sharing this fabulous story in a poem. Nicely written in no fixed meter and lots of rhyme, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Such a beautiful poem. It was poignant and so sweet. I think you have a real knack for poetry and your wife must feel very lucky that you love her so much. Well done. This is a great entry for your contest.
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Such a beautiful poem. It was poignant and so sweet. I think you have a real knack for poetry and your wife must feel very lucky that you love her so much. Well done. This is a great entry for your contest.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is excellent. Your rhymes are perfect even the hard places you found a rhyme. I admire your skill. I will read more of your writing. It's very good.
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This is excellent. Your rhymes are perfect even the hard places you found a rhyme. I admire your skill. I will read more of your writing. It's very good.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
Comment from WryWriter
Wish I had a six star for this wonderful poetic work. It flows like a massive river. The words of love pour forth. I absolutely love the last two lines. I really enjoyed reading your poem.
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Wish I had a six star for this wonderful poetic work. It flows like a massive river. The words of love pour forth. I absolutely love the last two lines. I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
Comment from lyenochka
Such a fascinating experience. You could have come to some more supernatural conclusion but you attribute "flying in the spirit" to the wonderful thing called love. Very nicely done! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Such a fascinating experience. You could have come to some more supernatural conclusion but you attribute "flying in the spirit" to the wonderful thing called love. Very nicely done! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the stars. My wife and I were married sixty years and she made my heart fly every day and night. She passed four years ago, so my spirit don't
fly much anymore. She grounded me. Thanks again.
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I'm sorry to hear about her passing. What an amazing thing to be married 60 years! You were both so blessed.
Comment from Earl Corp
This proves not all love poems are created equal. To write about an out of body experience using a love poem theme is pretty creative. Good luck in the contest.
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This proves not all love poems are created equal. To write about an out of body experience using a love poem theme is pretty creative. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
Comment from Beri Bee
This is a special kind of journey in a dream state or perhaps something deeper. I enjoyed traveling along on it with the poet. Thank you for sharing! I hope it was true!
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This is a special kind of journey in a dream state or perhaps something deeper. I enjoyed traveling along on it with the poet. Thank you for sharing! I hope it was true!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019