Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image.
-You have done
a good job without
the letter "A."
-The opening is a good hook.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I also like the comparison
of words to circles going round.
-A good entry; good luck.

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 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019

Thank you for reviewing, your good luck wishes and your great comments.

reply by Pam (respa) on 16-Jul-2019

You are very welcome.

Comment from Brenda Henderson

Excellent

I like this. Thoroughly thought provoking and engaging. It leads one into thoughtful contemplation. I know that you were writing about the letter "A" however when I first read it I felt a of the angst one might feel either awaiting the first communication or "letter" from someone else or trying to compose such a letter to send. In either event well written!

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 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019

Thank you for reviewing and for your constructive comments.