Five Minutes
Never waste a minute.38 total reviews
Comment from djeckert
A cool summary of the biggest five ( separated) minutes , in one's life. And shows also how time flies when you're in love. Well done. It's a very creative way to express all of that . God surely Blesses
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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A cool summary of the biggest five ( separated) minutes , in one's life. And shows also how time flies when you're in love. Well done. It's a very creative way to express all of that . God surely Blesses
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments, D. It is so appreciated.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :+)
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Yes, very worthy of a 6! This is stellar! I love it and the visual that comes with it. THOSE moments! They lock into our brains and come jumping out when we need them most. Very lovely. Great job! Hats off to you and for sharing!
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Yes, very worthy of a 6! This is stellar! I love it and the visual that comes with it. THOSE moments! They lock into our brains and come jumping out when we need them most. Very lovely. Great job! Hats off to you and for sharing!
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you, thank you, dear Wendy. I am so pleased you enjoyed this and thought me six worthy. I appreciate your kind words as always, my friend.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sal xo
Comment from JudyE
This is a very worthy flash fiction entry and I wish you the best of luck with it. You've chosen five very special moments to reflect on. I didn't find any spags. It's perfect as it is.
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This is a very worthy flash fiction entry and I wish you the best of luck with it. You've chosen five very special moments to reflect on. I didn't find any spags. It's perfect as it is.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for the excellent and kind review, dear Judy. I am so delighted you thought it perfect.
Sending you my best today as always with many thanks.
Sally xo
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Oh, my gosh, yes--how does it happen so fast? I wonder how a day can seem like it lasts forever, but a year slips by quickly, almost unnoticed. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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Oh, my gosh, yes--how does it happen so fast? I wonder how a day can seem like it lasts forever, but a year slips by quickly, almost unnoticed. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind comments, dear Debbie. I was so pleased to see your name and review today of my flash fiction entry.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from l.raven
HI Sally, oh the feelings of true love...when each kiss brings fireworks...and each fight brings you closer together...I miss those days my sweet friend...my husband passed way to soon...but left behind some beautiful memories...cherish every minute...very well written sweet girl...I love you poem...and love the picture my sweet friend...very nicely written...fifty years as one...love you...Linda xxoo
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HI Sally, oh the feelings of true love...when each kiss brings fireworks...and each fight brings you closer together...I miss those days my sweet friend...my husband passed way to soon...but left behind some beautiful memories...cherish every minute...very well written sweet girl...I love you poem...and love the picture my sweet friend...very nicely written...fifty years as one...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Dear Linda, thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate the fact that you have walked a similar path and understand the depth of this short piece. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xoxo
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your so welcome beautiful lady....much love and Blessings...xxoo Linda
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are right, Sally. Never waste a minute. I enjoyed your contest entry. Your words flow well to tell this story that really is about how time flies. Before you know it the couple who playfully ran in the rain is celebrating their 50th wedding anniversary and wondering where the time went. Minutes turn into days into months into years. But, they know they have used the time well never wasting a minute. Great job and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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You are right, Sally. Never waste a minute. I enjoyed your contest entry. Your words flow well to tell this story that really is about how time flies. Before you know it the couple who playfully ran in the rain is celebrating their 50th wedding anniversary and wondering where the time went. Minutes turn into days into months into years. But, they know they have used the time well never wasting a minute. Great job and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Yes, never wasting a moment has evolved into being my theme. I decided to put it into a short piece. Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments. I?m glad to hear you have this same philosophy.
Sending my best today as always, dear Jan.
Sally xo
Comment from Carla Trinklein
I've only been married 15 years but already I can see how fleeting the time is. My oldest daughter is 14, my youngest son 9. Yet it would be far more accurate to depict their ages in minutes, because that seems to be all the time I've had with them. Very well done, best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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I've only been married 15 years but already I can see how fleeting the time is. My oldest daughter is 14, my youngest son 9. Yet it would be far more accurate to depict their ages in minutes, because that seems to be all the time I've had with them. Very well done, best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Only married 15 years? Practically a newlywed in my eyes. Thank you for your kind review and comments. I appreciate you so much. Sending my best today as always, dear Carla.
Sally xo
Comment from Rikki66
Fifty years in five minutes. Good luck in the contest.**********************************************************************************
Rikki:)))))))))))
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Fifty years in five minutes. Good luck in the contest.**********************************************************************************
Rikki:)))))))))))
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much, dear Rikki. Your excellent review and well wishes mean so much.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
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You are truly welcome.
Rikki:)
Comment from royowen
What is life coming to when something precious ends with divorce, promises become as nothing, and somehow without promised love, where would we stand with God? Beautifully written entry Sally, this drew tears from my poor old eyes Sally. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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What is life coming to when something precious ends with divorce, promises become as nothing, and somehow without promised love, where would we stand with God? Beautifully written entry Sally, this drew tears from my poor old eyes Sally. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments dear Roy. I?m glad I made you cry just a bit. That wasn?t too hard, because I sense a sweet and tender heart of love for your wife. Sending you my best today as always, Sally :+)
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Good job Sally
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a lovely, condensed story, Sally.
The video you've chosen is the perfect match. It's the first time I listen to this song, but I think it's great.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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This is a lovely, condensed story, Sally.
The video you've chosen is the perfect match. It's the first time I listen to this song, but I think it's great.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for the excellent review of my flash fiction, dear Maria. I?m so glad you liked it, as well as the video and artwork. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo