Poems
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your 577 creates a great scene in the mind of readers, Bill. Good job with the syllable count. Your art choice is perfect to pair with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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Your 577 creates a great scene in the mind of readers, Bill. Good job with the syllable count. Your art choice is perfect to pair with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Jan