Miscellaneous Poems - vol 3
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Comment from Scarbrems
Oh boy, Craig, talk about stirring a pot! This is an excellent post, and exemplifies my argument that in many ways we can say far more with our creative work here than we ever can butting heads in the forums. This has everything. Emotional plea, common sense, and it rhymes as well! Excellent job, and you so should have entered it.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Oh boy, Craig, talk about stirring a pot! This is an excellent post, and exemplifies my argument that in many ways we can say far more with our creative work here than we ever can butting heads in the forums. This has everything. Emotional plea, common sense, and it rhymes as well! Excellent job, and you so should have entered it.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Thanks so much, Emma. There was never any doubt in my mind you would "get it". Sadly, I'm sure that won't be the case for everyone who reads it. I really appreciate the stars and the kind words.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks about empathy of a friend for his friend's loss of his girl, and about his needed thoughts and prayers for the loss; well said, well done.
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This poem speaks about empathy of a friend for his friend's loss of his girl, and about his needed thoughts and prayers for the loss; well said, well done.
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Thanks very much. Your time to review my piece is much appreciated :) Craig
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a cleverly rhymed poem with a poignant message here and I doubt the gun laws will ever change despite the loss of innocent lives because of the reasons you mention here. You handled your opinion with grace, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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This is a cleverly rhymed poem with a poignant message here and I doubt the gun laws will ever change despite the loss of innocent lives because of the reasons you mention here. You handled your opinion with grace, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Thanks so much for the kind review Dolly, glad to hear from you :) Cheers, Craig