Comment from Martie Zuckerman

Excellent

Well done for the 3-5-3 format. You told a whole story with just those few words. I came, I read, I understood. Thanks for sharing your work. Your choice of artwork is an enhancement and fits perfectly with your words.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020

Thanks much!

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

Hi dear Yvette,
You are so right, a lover's reunion is a whole body experience!
Your key words, 'feast' , 'fireworks', 'home'...with stunning pic reflects
the very essence of body connection for wholeness and connection.
Home is always a yearning where we indulge in feasting, and
warming welcomes. Even more intesified and ignited in lover's
feasting and impassioned welcomes!

Thanks for sharing dear, this is a sizzling feast indeed.
Love, blessings always friend!
Ronni










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 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020

Kinda hard to actually deliver passion in but 11 syllables, but I gave it a shot! ;) And home, as you say, is where most couples come together! ;) Thanx so much, my lady, and you take good care out there this week -- Terrific Tuesday to you!! ;) Yvette

Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry

Excellent

This is a passionate delight that speaks of the intensity of a lovers' reunion. They speak to each other on more than one level and the excitement is evident in your wonderful line 2.

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 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Thanks much for your review!