Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, JLR,
.....Vessel Of Your Prayer ....is a good acrostic poem for the challenge. It sounds like you are a devoted Christian. Good job.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Hello, JLR,
.....Vessel Of Your Prayer ....is a good acrostic poem for the challenge. It sounds like you are a devoted Christian. Good job.
Gypsy
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Gypsy, I am so and very grateful fro God's enduring Grace, thank you for the validation.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
JLR: beautiful poem honoring Jesus as we are the vessels
of prayer. I like the realizing the call. Great witness to the
world. I think this is time to be in prayers when we have
viruses floating around the world especially China. May
God protect and heal us. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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JLR: beautiful poem honoring Jesus as we are the vessels
of prayer. I like the realizing the call. Great witness to the
world. I think this is time to be in prayers when we have
viruses floating around the world especially China. May
God protect and heal us. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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flylikeaneagle, never could prayer be more intrinsically relevant for all of mankind. We do need God's Grace even more during this outbreak. I am humbled by your generous six-stars!
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Jim. Ending lines,"Right with the I AM" shows excellent choice of words for your theme. That line supports the rest of your poem. You've set up the acrostic form nicely, too. Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Hi Jim. Ending lines,"Right with the I AM" shows excellent choice of words for your theme. That line supports the rest of your poem. You've set up the acrostic form nicely, too. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Marilyn, I so value your wise discernment and validation, thank you!
Comment from Susan Larson
I love your opening lines:
V isions of Christ's hands
E ager to support
S inners on their knees.
It created a beautiful vision for me, the reader and the sinner. Very good, as always.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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I love your opening lines:
V isions of Christ's hands
E ager to support
S inners on their knees.
It created a beautiful vision for me, the reader and the sinner. Very good, as always.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Susan, I am so very pleased that this poem resonated with you. I celebrate with you the Joy of knowing God's Grace is just there for the asking and taking if it.
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent acrostic poem and a Spirit's Vessel. Quite an interesting form and you have done well with occasional rhyming and most importantly writing a cohesive piece of poetry.
Great job with your contribution to the Potlatch Club, J.
An enjoyable read this fine Saturday afternoon.
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Excellent acrostic poem and a Spirit's Vessel. Quite an interesting form and you have done well with occasional rhyming and most importantly writing a cohesive piece of poetry.
Great job with your contribution to the Potlatch Club, J.
An enjoyable read this fine Saturday afternoon.
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Gloria, I do thank you so very much! I am pleased you found pleasure reading it yesterday. Jim
Comment from RShipp
I had not heard of this poem form before, but I enjoyed your composition.
E very time, each day
R ight with the "I AM.
These last lines truly sum up a great walk with Christ.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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I had not heard of this poem form before, but I enjoyed your composition.
E very time, each day
R ight with the "I AM.
These last lines truly sum up a great walk with Christ.
Well done.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you, this is essence of God's enduring Grace for this sinner for certain.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is something about that picture that I find disturbing, I have seen it before and I find it kind of frightening. Your words are faithful and this is an unusual acrostic as the lines are usually longer, but I still enjoyed your poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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There is something about that picture that I find disturbing, I have seen it before and I find it kind of frightening. Your words are faithful and this is an unusual acrostic as the lines are usually longer, but I still enjoyed your poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thanks Dolly
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, I wrote a poem recently of Jesus not coming to change the world, but I realised this job was committed to us, we are rulers, but in God, and to rule via the power of prayer, as Jesus said, all power has been given Him, and He gives that to us. Well done Jim, an excellent acrostic, and wonderfully worded to impart this marvellous message, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Oh yes indeed, I wrote a poem recently of Jesus not coming to change the world, but I realised this job was committed to us, we are rulers, but in God, and to rule via the power of prayer, as Jesus said, all power has been given Him, and He gives that to us. Well done Jim, an excellent acrostic, and wonderfully worded to impart this marvellous message, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Roy, I delight in your validation, thank you and thank God for his unending Love and Grace.
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Well done
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello JLR
your poem about the Spirit Vessel
Is really good of how you capped the first letter of your poem
And what I noticed is a spiritual with a message to tell us readers that a prayer a day is good for our soul. And I agree.
Gert
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Hello JLR
your poem about the Spirit Vessel
Is really good of how you capped the first letter of your poem
And what I noticed is a spiritual with a message to tell us readers that a prayer a day is good for our soul. And I agree.
Gert
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Gert, thank you so much!
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You are welcome
JLR
Gert
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for introducing us to this type of acrostic poem. I see your notes say that the last word must be six letters. So your word is PRAYER. Very nice - to be a vessel of prayer to the Lord!
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thanks for introducing us to this type of acrostic poem. I see your notes say that the last word must be six letters. So your word is PRAYER. Very nice - to be a vessel of prayer to the Lord!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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lyenochka, I'm pleased you found this a new poetic format also.. Thank you.!