Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Ghost writer"Musings of an old man -2020
31 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! You pulled out all the stops and answered the free verse challenge well. You peppered the free verse with internal rhymes, lots of alliteration, consonance and even onomatopoeia! And you speak for many of us who are "old" and need to write past stories that want to be told.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Wow! You pulled out all the stops and answered the free verse challenge well. You peppered the free verse with internal rhymes, lots of alliteration, consonance and even onomatopoeia! And you speak for many of us who are "old" and need to write past stories that want to be told.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much!
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear author,
Awesome job!!!! Creepy and spine tingling awesome!!!! Thanks sooo much for taking the time to post this on fanstory!!! May God bless you and your family!!!!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Dear author,
Awesome job!!!! Creepy and spine tingling awesome!!!! Thanks sooo much for taking the time to post this on fanstory!!! May God bless you and your family!!!!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Anne-Marie, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this fun poem, that I thoroughly enjoyed penning.
Comment from karenina
This felt as real as can be--and gave a dew dimension to the definition of "muse!" I am sure you've had the experience of picking up your pen, unsure of what you will write--and suddenly a seemingly fully formed poem comes flowing through the ink as if you were merely the medium, not the poet!? This gives substance to that experience while still maintaining that eerie and ethereal theme! Thoroughly enjoyable read!--Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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This felt as real as can be--and gave a dew dimension to the definition of "muse!" I am sure you've had the experience of picking up your pen, unsure of what you will write--and suddenly a seemingly fully formed poem comes flowing through the ink as if you were merely the medium, not the poet!? This gives substance to that experience while still maintaining that eerie and ethereal theme! Thoroughly enjoyable read!--Karenina
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Karenina, yes I have had those special visitations where the words come very much from without not from within. They often are my most cherished writings. Your kind words make me smile, thank you!
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You are welcome! Aren't those seemingly magical poems a thrill? It's happened a few times for me and I am always in awe!--Karenina
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Ghost writer
by JLR
Hello, my friend,
This is the second poem about a ghost that I read today. Great entry for the Ghosts event in The Fabulous Free Versers Club. I love horror stories and poems. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Ghost writer
by JLR
Hello, my friend,
This is the second poem about a ghost that I read today. Great entry for the Ghosts event in The Fabulous Free Versers Club. I love horror stories and poems. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Gypsy Rose, thank you!
Comment from RShipp
'With a flourish of motion,
the quill seemed to float buoyantly
along the less than smooth surface'
Oh, so very descriptive!
I don't know if I would take up the challenge- or run!
Enjoyed!
You were quick on the trigger with having one ready! I have enjoyed being a part of the Fabulous Free Versers Club.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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'With a flourish of motion,
the quill seemed to float buoyantly
along the less than smooth surface'
Oh, so very descriptive!
I don't know if I would take up the challenge- or run!
Enjoyed!
You were quick on the trigger with having one ready! I have enjoyed being a part of the Fabulous Free Versers Club.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Robert, I as well! A solid group of people!
Comment from amada
"...Suddenly, a ghostly figure evolved hunched over my deeply scarred..." Wow...I almost dropped my eye glasses upon reading this line. Your writing here is very imaginative. I wonder if they scare you by the hour!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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"...Suddenly, a ghostly figure evolved hunched over my deeply scarred..." Wow...I almost dropped my eye glasses upon reading this line. Your writing here is very imaginative. I wonder if they scare you by the hour!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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amada, thank you for recognizing my work through your reviews and comments.
Comment from Eternal Muse
An extremely creative poem. Fantastic descriptive imagery and visuals. The ghost of winter came to life with your words (lol). This made me nostalgic for East Coast and their winters. We don't get them here in Nevada.
Thank you sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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An extremely creative poem. Fantastic descriptive imagery and visuals. The ghost of winter came to life with your words (lol). This made me nostalgic for East Coast and their winters. We don't get them here in Nevada.
Thank you sharing.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Eternal Muse, thank you for the chuckles shared.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, I want to know the story now, you had me on the edge of my seat with anticipation here and now I want to know what story the ghost had to tell, a fine well written free write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Oh my goodness, I want to know the story now, you had me on the edge of my seat with anticipation here and now I want to know what story the ghost had to tell, a fine well written free write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Dolly, I thank you so very much for your review and comments.
Comment from damommy
This is very good. I could picture this so easily from your wording. This ghost is begging for its story to be told before it's too late. I wonder what the story would be. Hmmmm.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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This is very good. I could picture this so easily from your wording. This ghost is begging for its story to be told before it's too late. I wonder what the story would be. Hmmmm.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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damommy, perhaps there should be a short story evolve here.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the ghost who inspired you to write the story if her existence and her story that needs to be told to the world to know about.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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A very well-written poem about the ghost who inspired you to write the story if her existence and her story that needs to be told to the world to know about.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Sandra, thank you for your review and comments I so appreciate.