Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Winds of Change"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Earthwriter
liked the poem very much and i thought the choice of picture and colors brought enhancement to the piece very well done i enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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liked the poem very much and i thought the choice of picture and colors brought enhancement to the piece very well done i enjoyed it.
Comment Written 05-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from prophetess
This is a really good piece. I know the feeling you convey only too well. It's sad that we for the most part are so afraid of love. We want it more than anything and when we have it we run away from it. What is that?
Prophetess
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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This is a really good piece. I know the feeling you convey only too well. It's sad that we for the most part are so afraid of love. We want it more than anything and when we have it we run away from it. What is that?
Prophetess
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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thank you
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You're welcome
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
The poem stands out greatly, mainly because of your word phrases. I felt great emotional power--such as anguish, bliss, anticpation and love.
One puntuation problem:
Are you: my love, my life, my soul mate?>>this would flow well if you were consistent with this style of writing poetry. As you switch styles, the colon should be taken out.
Isaiah Ramesses
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The poem stands out greatly, mainly because of your word phrases. I felt great emotional power--such as anguish, bliss, anticpation and love.
One puntuation problem:
Are you: my love, my life, my soul mate?>>this would flow well if you were consistent with this style of writing poetry. As you switch styles, the colon should be taken out.
Isaiah Ramesses
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from Njorgensen
This piece is very moving and touching. You've incorporated queries and statements that come naturally when love is lost. It flowed very well and carried me through the lines very smoothly. Excellent.
Nancy
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This piece is very moving and touching. You've incorporated queries and statements that come naturally when love is lost. It flowed very well and carried me through the lines very smoothly. Excellent.
Nancy
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thank you Nancy
Comment from Realist101
Hi Gary, what a really heartfelt love poem...very romantic, and deep. I think any woman would melt if she were given this to read...very nice...Susan
reply by the author on 04-May-2010
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Hi Gary, what a really heartfelt love poem...very romantic, and deep. I think any woman would melt if she were given this to read...very nice...Susan
Comment Written 04-May-2010
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thank you so much susan for your review
Comment from Trybuck
Winds of change can be friendly
Increasing the passion
Kindled by a deeper love, untrendy
Change is not always bad, just different
Well done, Buck
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Winds of change can be friendly
Increasing the passion
Kindled by a deeper love, untrendy
Change is not always bad, just different
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 04-May-2010
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thank you for reading Buck
Comment from Mastery
I am beginning to see that you are a very prolific poet, Deepwater. This one is very well-written and has superb imagery. I like this in particular:
"Like ripples betraying still waters, will you stay with me?" Bravo! Bob
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I am beginning to see that you are a very prolific poet, Deepwater. This one is very well-written and has superb imagery. I like this in particular:
"Like ripples betraying still waters, will you stay with me?" Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 04-May-2010
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thank you Bob for your most welcome comments
Comment from Kingsland
This poem presents some very good emotional attitude. I found it to be well written and a joy to have read and written a review for... John
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This poem presents some very good emotional attitude. I found it to be well written and a joy to have read and written a review for... John
Comment Written 04-May-2010
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thank you john
Comment from Alpha Female
Wonderful poem, I love the way you use water for emotions, this flows well, has a beautiful meaning and leads the reader right where you want them to go.
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Wonderful poem, I love the way you use water for emotions, this flows well, has a beautiful meaning and leads the reader right where you want them to go.
Comment Written 04-May-2010
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thank you for your nice comments Alpha
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Donna Thompson
fI dare show you my heart, will you cherish the passion it would bring?
Or slowly destroy the life within with promises that will never be,
When I fall will you extend your inner spirit to catch my worthlessness
I think this is so beautifully written. nicely done
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fI dare show you my heart, will you cherish the passion it would bring?
Or slowly destroy the life within with promises that will never be,
When I fall will you extend your inner spirit to catch my worthlessness
I think this is so beautifully written. nicely done
Comment Written 04-May-2010
reply by the author on 04-May-2010
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thank you Donna for your great comments