Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Graveyard by the sea"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from papa55mike
Well, this is the first ghostly ship I've read about in this contest. The descriptions are rich and vivid. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a grerat day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Well, this is the first ghostly ship I've read about in this contest. The descriptions are rich and vivid. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a grerat day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thanks Mike!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Very well in the description of the environment you set up in telling of this ghost story in a poem. You put your reader in the scene.
As I was reading, I also thought this would also make an excellent tale in story form as you have done an excellent telling in poetic form.
Thank you for the read.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Very well in the description of the environment you set up in telling of this ghost story in a poem. You put your reader in the scene.
As I was reading, I also thought this would also make an excellent tale in story form as you have done an excellent telling in poetic form.
Thank you for the read.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Mary, thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Tis supposed to be creepy, I know, but your scene (its sounds and scents) is so very well-done that it cn almost deliver a calm in the acceptance of such a regal and, perhaps, ghostly sight that simply continues on its way after its surreal appearance... what a treat for the nightwatchman!! ;) :) :) Well done, J-L, loved the whole ambiance you created for the reader, sir! ;) Best of luck to you in the contest! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Tis supposed to be creepy, I know, but your scene (its sounds and scents) is so very well-done that it cn almost deliver a calm in the acceptance of such a regal and, perhaps, ghostly sight that simply continues on its way after its surreal appearance... what a treat for the nightwatchman!! ;) :) :) Well done, J-L, loved the whole ambiance you created for the reader, sir! ;) Best of luck to you in the contest! ;) ;)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Yvette, thank you so much!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is fantastic. I love the way you create a creepy and scary feel in your poem. Wonderful word choices. I love the use of dialogue as you tell a story. Great job.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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This is fantastic. I love the way you create a creepy and scary feel in your poem. Wonderful word choices. I love the use of dialogue as you tell a story. Great job.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Michael, thank you very much! Free verse is my comfort zone and I enjoy the seasonal topics from which to create a new poem.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I read with interest the free verse Halloween entry. I am fond of reading horror and creepy stories and I find this quite unique in style and contest! Thank you for sharing.Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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I read with interest the free verse Halloween entry. I am fond of reading horror and creepy stories and I find this quite unique in style and contest! Thank you for sharing.Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Seshardi, thank you for every word of good wishes.
Comment from AnnieDawn
This is a very interesting free verse Halloween entry. A different take from some of the others I have read and unique. It is nice to have another good quality entry to review. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed this poem. Great job.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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This is a very interesting free verse Halloween entry. A different take from some of the others I have read and unique. It is nice to have another good quality entry to review. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed this poem. Great job.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Annie, thank you very much!
Comment from equestrik
The picture here is very alluring and truly matches the writing very well. Your poem is well constructed and a good one for the season. Best to you in the upcoming contest.
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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The picture here is very alluring and truly matches the writing very well. Your poem is well constructed and a good one for the season. Best to you in the upcoming contest.
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Equestrik, I appreciate your good wishes. Thank you!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
How creepy :) I've always enjoyed stories and poems about graveyards, shipwrecks, hauntings, lost souls. I could actually hear the 'ding-ding' of the ship's bell. So glad the night watchman had enough experience under his belt not to give into the 'damsel from the sea'.
Very, very best wishes in the contest.
Gale
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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How creepy :) I've always enjoyed stories and poems about graveyards, shipwrecks, hauntings, lost souls. I could actually hear the 'ding-ding' of the ship's bell. So glad the night watchman had enough experience under his belt not to give into the 'damsel from the sea'.
Very, very best wishes in the contest.
Gale
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Gale, thank you for investing the time to read and comment on this Halloween poem contest, I appreciate the good wishes.
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The pleasure was all mine.