Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Shirley McLain
I think you'll have both confused before they finally get together. You once again wrote a great chapter, which I enjoyed reading. Have a great afternoon. Shirley
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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I think you'll have both confused before they finally get together. You once again wrote a great chapter, which I enjoyed reading. Have a great afternoon. Shirley
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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I think you're right. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Ali and Cordero show they were able to make up after their dispute. It was Pat who set things up, as they realize. He'll be a good one to avoid. The moonlight horseback ride sounds romantic. That cougar sort of spoils the mood, though. Cord certainly seems more satisfied with life on the ranch than as a vet in Houston. Great development of Cord's character in this. Funny thought about being interrupted when he's about to kiss Ali. judi
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Ali and Cordero show they were able to make up after their dispute. It was Pat who set things up, as they realize. He'll be a good one to avoid. The moonlight horseback ride sounds romantic. That cougar sort of spoils the mood, though. Cord certainly seems more satisfied with life on the ranch than as a vet in Houston. Great development of Cord's character in this. Funny thought about being interrupted when he's about to kiss Ali. judi
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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His kiss attempts will continue to get interrupted. LOL More about Cord's previous relationship coming up. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Aw, this was a lovely chapter and a lovely continuation to the story, Barbara. Yes, I believe Cordero is in love. I love to be among horses. I have a few in my lifetime. So they'd found a nursing mare. That is good news. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Aw, this was a lovely chapter and a lovely continuation to the story, Barbara. Yes, I believe Cordero is in love. I love to be among horses. I have a few in my lifetime. So they'd found a nursing mare. That is good news. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. More about the foal is coming. LOL
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Poor Cordero, he might get that kiss one day! Lol. I just know there will be more trouble ahead, you always do that to your readers, lol. But we do know that Ali and Cord are in love, that won't change regardless of the ups and downs they'll go through. Another wonderful post, Barbara, I'm really enjoying this story. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Poor Cordero, he might get that kiss one day! Lol. I just know there will be more trouble ahead, you always do that to your readers, lol. But we do know that Ali and Cord are in love, that won't change regardless of the ups and downs they'll go through. Another wonderful post, Barbara, I'm really enjoying this story. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. Cord will attempt to get that kiss for a while. LOL
Comment from nomi338
I swear, it is like you have a magic touch when it comes to creating likable characters. Some characters who are written to be good guys are women, they are so good, the become cartoon like. Conversely your characters are good with believable flaws that do not take away from or diminish their good character.
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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I swear, it is like you have a magic touch when it comes to creating likable characters. Some characters who are written to be good guys are women, they are so good, the become cartoon like. Conversely your characters are good with believable flaws that do not take away from or diminish their good character.
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you. I have one reviewer who isn't so sure about Cordero. I sort of like him. LOL
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You will never win over every reader no matter what. As long as he does not abandon the story nothing is lost. Write on.
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I enjoy writing so much that I won't abandon it.
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Good for you. I never imagined for one minute that you would give up in any way.
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LOL It's not in my make-up.