Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from karenina
Can't go wrong writing about Autumn! A very appealing 2-10-2...with rhyme no less!
Clever near mirrored first and third lines.
Gosh, I love this season!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Can't go wrong writing about Autumn! A very appealing 2-10-2...with rhyme no less!
Clever near mirrored first and third lines.
Gosh, I love this season!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Yes, the crisp evenings, wampum sunny days a sea of colors, man, oh! man.
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"wampum sunny days:
Sounds like another great poem title!
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
You have chosen wonderful imagery for this piece. The literal image supports your words very well. I might have used "while" instead of with in the second line, but that is just a thought.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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You have chosen wonderful imagery for this piece. The literal image supports your words very well. I might have used "while" instead of with in the second line, but that is just a thought.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Thanks for your comments and suggestion.
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:-)
Comment from Thomas Blanks
Autumn is a 2-10-2 poem entered in a contest, but I can't see the poet's name. Autumn is a season up North in the United States that I used to enjoy, with crisp mornings and bright red maple leaves. This poem made me miss Autumn the season. Autumn in South Florida is just a word. It means nothing much except that there are only six more weeks of Hurricane season and that the worst part of it is over. It means the temperatures will be in the 70s instead of the high 80s and low 90s. It is followed by another word, "winter," which means the rain will stop and it will stay in the 70s during the day. We still have to cut the grass. Not that I am going to complain.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Autumn is a 2-10-2 poem entered in a contest, but I can't see the poet's name. Autumn is a season up North in the United States that I used to enjoy, with crisp mornings and bright red maple leaves. This poem made me miss Autumn the season. Autumn in South Florida is just a word. It means nothing much except that there are only six more weeks of Hurricane season and that the worst part of it is over. It means the temperatures will be in the 70s instead of the high 80s and low 90s. It is followed by another word, "winter," which means the rain will stop and it will stay in the 70s during the day. We still have to cut the grass. Not that I am going to complain.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Thomas, up north in western NC (ha, ha). We enjoy the crisp autumn evenings, warm sunny days. Literally we have four seasons each with there own expressions of life and the revolving earth we ride upon.
Comment from Carlos' girl
This is a good entry for the contest. I like it. It is compliant and it is perfectly poetic. Lovely.
This was not easy but your poetry seems effortless. I like the illustration too. Pretty
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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This is a good entry for the contest. I like it. It is compliant and it is perfectly poetic. Lovely.
This was not easy but your poetry seems effortless. I like the illustration too. Pretty
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Thanks young lady!
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Most welcome anonymous!
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is great for the contest except you have eleven syllables in the middle.
Ha! Made you look.
With work like this, I don't think that you will be winless for long!
Nice job!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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This is great for the contest except you have eleven syllables in the middle.
Ha! Made you look.
With work like this, I don't think that you will be winless for long!
Nice job!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Thank you, I did pause for a second or two. 🤔🤔
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your fourteen syllables to describe one of my favorite things in nature--those beautiful fall leaves. You've included
alliteration, a metaphor, and personification--Great!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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You have made excellent use of your fourteen syllables to describe one of my favorite things in nature--those beautiful fall leaves. You've included
alliteration, a metaphor, and personification--Great!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice poem you nailed the form and captured the mood of autumn leaves in all their glory. You also captured the mood with the photo image chosen. where did you get the image?
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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nice poem you nailed the form and captured the mood of autumn leaves in all their glory. You also captured the mood with the photo image chosen. where did you get the image?
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thanks much!
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
This is excellent. Perfectly executed 2-10-2. The imagery, the rhyme, the nature subject - all so well done. I will look for it in the contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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This is excellent. Perfectly executed 2-10-2. The imagery, the rhyme, the nature subject - all so well done. I will look for it in the contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Charles, thank you for the good wishes
Comment from royowen
What a great piece of artwork to embellish your great entry in this contest. The time of the year, I must admit is the glory of death is the way I view autumn, before nature goes into repose in winter, a super post my friend, well done, blessings and good luck, Roy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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What a great piece of artwork to embellish your great entry in this contest. The time of the year, I must admit is the glory of death is the way I view autumn, before nature goes into repose in winter, a super post my friend, well done, blessings and good luck, Roy
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thank you my friend for your comments. Blessings back! 🙏🙏
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A.pleasure
Comment from JoannaN
This is a good entry for the contest. I like the rhymes you used for your poem. Hush-paintbrush-blush - these words mimic the sounds made by leaves in autumn.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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This is a good entry for the contest. I like the rhymes you used for your poem. Hush-paintbrush-blush - these words mimic the sounds made by leaves in autumn.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Smiling with much appreciation for your kind words.