Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Exceptional

WOW!!! Get out of that one!! Loved this chapter, Barbara, our Ali's the girl and she's not going to be put off!! Brilliant, my friend, can't say enough good things about it. Very well done, and now I can't wait for the next chapter!! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022

Thank you for the encouragement.

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Very nice story. This is well written.

I think the period after Lester in this sentence should be a comma as it is indicative of speaking:

addressed Lester. "When you called

I've been following this. Nice work!


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 Comment Written 06-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022

You're right. I changed it. Thank you for the catch and the kind review.

reply by Douglas Goff on 06-Nov-2022

I love your writing. You are very good, my friend!

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022

Thank you.

Comment from Judy Lawless

Exceptional

This is an excellent chapter, Barbara. Alexandra has shown her smart and unflinching lawyer side very well with all the answers to Pat's denials. I really enjoyed reading this one, and look forward to the next whenever you get to it.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022

Thank you for the encouragement.

reply by Judy Lawless on 06-Nov-2022

You're very welcome, Barbara.

Comment from Shirley McLain

Exceptional

I didn't think I had any sixes left. This was short, but excellent. Ali is a tough lady, and I am eager to read more. I didn't see any errors. Have a great Sunday. Shirley

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022

Thank you for the kind review.