Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This verse touched my heart, as it triggered many fond memories of time shared with friends and family.
The rhyme pattern works well and creates a smooth flow.
The sensory words that you selected worked well to pull me into your writing.
Happy holiday's!!!
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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This verse touched my heart, as it triggered many fond memories of time shared with friends and family.
The rhyme pattern works well and creates a smooth flow.
The sensory words that you selected worked well to pull me into your writing.
Happy holiday's!!!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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Thanks K.L., many blessings to you this Christmas season.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a wonderful Christmas poem evocative of the extended family holidays we had when growing up. We had Christmas Eve at my grandparents house with all the aunts and uncles and cousins and on Christmas mornings we opened out gifts at home. Those were lovely times and you poem and the picture reminds me of those days.
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This is a wonderful Christmas poem evocative of the extended family holidays we had when growing up. We had Christmas Eve at my grandparents house with all the aunts and uncles and cousins and on Christmas mornings we opened out gifts at home. Those were lovely times and you poem and the picture reminds me of those days.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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Mary, thanks so much for sharing your fond memories. Sadly, I feel as though these old traditions are fading away.
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You are very welcome. I know just what you mean about fading traditions.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I enjoyed your poem. It truly pictures a Christmas
We all wish for. You set a beautiful descriptive scene.
Like your words, the picture is perfect.
Best wishes
Mary
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I enjoyed your poem. It truly pictures a Christmas
We all wish for. You set a beautiful descriptive scene.
Like your words, the picture is perfect.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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Thanks Mary!
Comment from Paul McFarland
Pretty good, Jim. It brings back memories when our family would tramp out through the woods in search of a Christmas tree. I've got to drag mine out of the attic in a few days.
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Pretty good, Jim. It brings back memories when our family would tramp out through the woods in search of a Christmas tree. I've got to drag mine out of the attic in a few days.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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Thanks Paul, I dragged mine off the shelf as I try to do every Thanksgiving. Weekend, 😉😉
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem for the club read well, JLR. Your words plus the
picture made a memorable poem. I liked the rhymes, the
smooth flow, the great imagery, and the wonderful message.
After the time spent getting the tree, the family celebrates with
good food, a warm fire, and the knowledge that their day had
many blessings.
Thanks for participating, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Your poem for the club read well, JLR. Your words plus the
picture made a memorable poem. I liked the rhymes, the
smooth flow, the great imagery, and the wonderful message.
After the time spent getting the tree, the family celebrates with
good food, a warm fire, and the knowledge that their day had
many blessings.
Thanks for participating, Jan
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, Jan!
Comment from royowen
I love the great literary scene you've set here Jim, the artwork is absolutely perfect for the narrative that you've.written, I love the way you've approached it my friend, the artwork and the great language are perfect, well done, blessings Roy
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I love the great literary scene you've set here Jim, the artwork is absolutely perfect for the narrative that you've.written, I love the way you've approached it my friend, the artwork and the great language are perfect, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thank you friend!
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A pleasure
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely and well written poem you have penned for the Picture This club event. You used great descriptive words that went well with this lovely picture. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very lovely and well written poem you have penned for the Picture This club event. You used great descriptive words that went well with this lovely picture. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
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TERI, THANK YOU!
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A free flowing poem with unforced rhymes. The words are homey and comfortable. The narrative stays on point. The presentation adds to the narrative. The whole is artisticly arranged.
Thanks for sharing.
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A free flowing poem with unforced rhymes. The words are homey and comfortable. The narrative stays on point. The presentation adds to the narrative. The whole is artisticly arranged.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thanks!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Snow does show it is December. You have chosen a good picture fit this poem.
I am not touched by the following sentence as I miss both my mom and my bf wife. They are gone am I haven't a cooked Christmas meal for years but hotel restaurant meals to celebrate the season.
Thanks for sharing this piece with us.
Ma has a hearty meal soon to be served.
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Snow does show it is December. You have chosen a good picture fit this poem.
I am not touched by the following sentence as I miss both my mom and my bf wife. They are gone am I haven't a cooked Christmas meal for years but hotel restaurant meals to celebrate the season.
Thanks for sharing this piece with us.
Ma has a hearty meal soon to be served.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Ugh, My condelences! 🙏🙏
Comment from Pam (respa)
-You did a good job with your poem,
and it represents the picture very well.
-Effective imagery and rhyme that
create a vivid word picture of each scene.
-There is a fresh scent from the newly cut tree,
with the deer in the snow under the full moon,
and the "hearty meal" topped off with "fresh apple strudel."
-That is a good way to end the festive meal.
-Well done!!
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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-You did a good job with your poem,
and it represents the picture very well.
-Effective imagery and rhyme that
create a vivid word picture of each scene.
-There is a fresh scent from the newly cut tree,
with the deer in the snow under the full moon,
and the "hearty meal" topped off with "fresh apple strudel."
-That is a good way to end the festive meal.
-Well done!!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Pam, thanks!
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You are welcome, Jim!!