Billy and Me
A baseball story of two brothers26 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a great story! My sister and I are eleven months apart. I guess that makes us Irish twins. I'll have to pass that on to her. I'm sure she'll be overjoyed! :) NOT! Anyway, It was well-written and an enjoyable read. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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This is a great story! My sister and I are eleven months apart. I guess that makes us Irish twins. I'll have to pass that on to her. I'm sure she'll be overjoyed! :) NOT! Anyway, It was well-written and an enjoyable read. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you, John, for reading and sharing.
John
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The kinship of siblings may be unruly and distempered but when blood is on the line and the enemy comes from a different camp family matters most. .........................................
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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The kinship of siblings may be unruly and distempered but when blood is on the line and the enemy comes from a different camp family matters most. .........................................
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Absolutely!
Thank you for reading and sharing.
John
Comment from royowen
That's nice that he's protective of his younger brother, I was wondering how the umpire would know it was deliberate, it's probably one of the few tones one can get away with it, I'm glad the ball was caught, I know that it's a little frowned upon to miss a catch. Beautifully written dear friend, blessings Roy
Typo : Billy is the (older) of us, elder? 2: When (they're) pitcher. Their?
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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That's nice that he's protective of his younger brother, I was wondering how the umpire would know it was deliberate, it's probably one of the few tones one can get away with it, I'm glad the ball was caught, I know that it's a little frowned upon to miss a catch. Beautifully written dear friend, blessings Roy
Typo : Billy is the (older) of us, elder? 2: When (they're) pitcher. Their?
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Corrections done. Thank you for pointing those out. I appreciate it.
I?m glad you took the time to read this and share.
John
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Most welcome
Comment from Sally Law
Oh my, a sweet one here of the protectionism found between brothers so close. My two oldest are close in age and still remain close. My twin grandsons are inseparable.
What Yu would anyone be offended by the term Irish twins? I can't imagine.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your day.
Sal :))
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Oh my, a sweet one here of the protectionism found between brothers so close. My two oldest are close in age and still remain close. My twin grandsons are inseparable.
What Yu would anyone be offended by the term Irish twins? I can't imagine.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your day.
Sal :))
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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No one should be offended. Irish twins is a known term, I just wanted to be safe. You know how people can be.
Thank you so much for reading and sharing! Twin grandsons, huh. Sounds great!
Thx again. John
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Yes, I suppose you're right. I wasn't offered. I think the term is sweet. :))
Comment from country ranch writer
Arentbug brothers great! They don't let no one pick on you. Inky he is allowed to pick on you cause that's what big brothers do. Great job! No mattercwhi one the game, you didn't get mad you get even one what it another to protect the one you love.
Feb.-2-2023.
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Arentbug brothers great! They don't let no one pick on you. Inky he is allowed to pick on you cause that's what big brothers do. Great job! No mattercwhi one the game, you didn't get mad you get even one what it another to protect the one you love.
Feb.-2-2023.
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Barbara, for the kind words regarding my story. Greatly appreciated. John
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These kids are loving the game here and I loved your warm-hearted and family orientated conversations and camaraderie. I felt I was there watching the game.
I just have a couple of suggestions for you here:
That is the extent (of) my skills as a left fielder. I don't want anything more (than) that.
Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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These kids are loving the game here and I loved your warm-hearted and family orientated conversations and camaraderie. I felt I was there watching the game.
I just have a couple of suggestions for you here:
That is the extent (of) my skills as a left fielder. I don't want anything more (than) that.
Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Corrections made! Thank you, Dolly, for reading and correcting. I always appreciate it.
John
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No problem, thank you for the nomination, this was a joy to read x x x