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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for sharing about your publishing of your first novel! It sounds like a lot of heart-wrenching circumstances that bring two people together. Congratulations on getting it published in hardback!

for herself and your infant child. (her)

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
    Thank you for the support.
Comment from w.j.debi
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Your synopsis is intriging. Anna has a lot to overcome, but so does Troy. Can they make it work and heal each other? That is the question that will keep readers going to the end to find the answer.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
    Thank you for the support.
Comment from BethShelby
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Congratulation on getting it out again with a new publisher. I don't remember reading any of this book. I'll try to look for it on Amazon. I hope it does well.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
    I would appreciate it if you do read it. Thank you for the support.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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I am glad you were able to find your book and congratulations on having it printed again. Sounds like it would be a good read. I hope that it is successful for you.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
    Thank you for the good wishes. I appreciate it.
reply by Anne Johnston on 09-Feb-2023
    You are welcome
Comment from nomi338
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I promise you that I will find this book, purchase it and read it. At age 13, I, a skinny boy threatened to end my muscular step father for his abuse of my mother. He sneered at me and asked what could I do to him? I confidently told him that, he had to go to sleep sometime. He gave me a look that confirmed that he believed me. He left our house that day and did not return.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
    WOW!!! I do hope you find the book. I hope you enjoy reading. It's does have a little bit of violence. You can't write this type of book without it.
reply by nomi338 on 09-Feb-2023
    Understood. The violence I do not like is gratuitous violence.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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I thought I'd read everything you'd posted, but I'm not remembering this right off. A subject that can't have enough attention driven to it.
Thanks for sharing.

Two Tattered Hearts was my first published book, but only came out as an(d) E-book.

As Anna struggles to free(,) herself . . .

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
    I was so excited it's finally out that I hurried and posted this. Thank you for the help. This was posted here back in 2012.
Comment from Sally Law
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Fantastic! I remember you telling me about this. I'm glad you found it and have a new publication.

A little nit in your teaser: As Anna struggles to free, herself she meets a stranger, Troy.

As Anna struggles to free herself, she meets a stranger, Troy. [Comma after herself.]

I hope this helpful. Congratulations, Barbara!
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
    I have made that correction. I was so excited it finally got published again that I hurried to post.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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I am sure this book is very good. I will check it out. Any kind of abuse is so dramatic. When it is at the hands of someone you know, the feeling is tragic, very stressful.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
    I would appreciate you reading it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
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I love the cover. The black and the yellow really pop. I will be one of your customers on Amazon. I can't wait to read it, since you are such an excellent writer. Have a great afternoon, again.Shirley

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
    I would appreciate if you do. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Barbara, that is absolutely great news. Congratulations to have your first book out in paperback. I hope many will find it. I will certainly look for it.
Abuse of any kind should never be tolerated. Ulla:)))

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
    I would appreciate if you do find it. Thank you for the encouragement.