Guided by Faith
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Comment from Jay Squires
I really enjoyed this chapter with the computerized sketch artist. I'm glad the chapter picture was of the suspect. I thought at first it was supposed to be Seth! A special congratulations to you for your "Meet the Author" experience and subsequent sales. You seem to be doing all the right things.
Jay
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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I really enjoyed this chapter with the computerized sketch artist. I'm glad the chapter picture was of the suspect. I thought at first it was supposed to be Seth! A special congratulations to you for your "Meet the Author" experience and subsequent sales. You seem to be doing all the right things.
Jay
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the support.
Comment from royowen
It's interesting how rivals can become mixed into a story. The aggression of Peggy, makes it very interesting, and gives this story a bit more spice Barbara, Emma's witnessing of a man they are trying to identify, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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It's interesting how rivals can become mixed into a story. The aggression of Peggy, makes it very interesting, and gives this story a bit more spice Barbara, Emma's witnessing of a man they are trying to identify, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement. Peggy will be a problem.
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I?ll bet
Comment from Anne Johnston
Another good chapter. Seems like Emma has some competition. That could lead to some interesting events in the future. I like your explaining the steps as Emma is trying to remember what the man looked like, and creating a picture on the computer.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Another good chapter. Seems like Emma has some competition. That could lead to some interesting events in the future. I like your explaining the steps as Emma is trying to remember what the man looked like, and creating a picture on the computer.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome
Comment from lancellot
This is nicely written. I didn't see anything that needs attention. Facial recreation software is amazing. I've seen it in action.
Good, like conversational tone, and you got the character's ages out there. Established relationship status and potential rivals to the mix.
All seems to be going according to plan.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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This is nicely written. I didn't see anything that needs attention. Facial recreation software is amazing. I've seen it in action.
Good, like conversational tone, and you got the character's ages out there. Established relationship status and potential rivals to the mix.
All seems to be going according to plan.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
It looks like Seth isn't too impressed with Peggy but she is trying to get something going. Seth is making himself a part of Emma life but she seems caution about getting involved. Your story is interesing to read and I'm anxious to see where it goes. I like the mystery.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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It looks like Seth isn't too impressed with Peggy but she is trying to get something going. Seth is making himself a part of Emma life but she seems caution about getting involved. Your story is interesing to read and I'm anxious to see where it goes. I like the mystery.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Peggy will be a problem throughout this story. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
This is still a great story. I wonder about Peggy? Jealousy or something? I wonder if she had any connection with the guy they are looking for? No spags.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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This is still a great story. I wonder about Peggy? Jealousy or something? I wonder if she had any connection with the guy they are looking for? No spags.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Peggy will be a problem from now on. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Wow! A quick response. Ulla has a good chapter up as well.
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She does. I've read it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Barbara, another romantic chapter. I've been married before but i never had a man like Seth. I like how protective he is of Emma. Peggy was very Jealous and she doesn't have a chance. I like how Seth and Emma's relationship is unfolding. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Hello, Barbara, another romantic chapter. I've been married before but i never had a man like Seth. I like how protective he is of Emma. Peggy was very Jealous and she doesn't have a chance. I like how Seth and Emma's relationship is unfolding. Well done!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Seth and Emma's relationship will unfold slowly. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jmdg1954
Barbara. I think my six stars indicates what I thought of the chapter.
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1) I like the introduction of Peggy into the story. Sounds like a high school nemesis or adversary of sorts. Hopefully that plays into the story.
2) good slight comical lines to keep the story light
3) you are slowly, expertly drawing Seth and Emma closer, with cutesy dialogue.
Looking forward to more,
John
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Barbara. I think my six stars indicates what I thought of the chapter.
Note-
1) I like the introduction of Peggy into the story. Sounds like a high school nemesis or adversary of sorts. Hopefully that plays into the story.
2) good slight comical lines to keep the story light
3) you are slowly, expertly drawing Seth and Emma closer, with cutesy dialogue.
Looking forward to more,
John
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Peggy will become a problem in this story. We'll see her often. Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from damommy
I think Peggy Barton is going to be trouble. She's very aggressive, and seems to think she has dibs on Seth. Good job with the description Emma gave.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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I think Peggy Barton is going to be trouble. She's very aggressive, and seems to think she has dibs on Seth. Good job with the description Emma gave.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Peggy will become a problem in this story. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Amazing what these updated computers can do. I had a son who could sketch art as you told him. He would adore this computer work nowadays. Good one, Barb.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Amazing what these updated computers can do. I had a son who could sketch art as you told him. He would adore this computer work nowadays. Good one, Barb.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I struggle just getting my computer to let me type on it. LOL