Guided by Faith
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Comment from Sankey
Another almost saucy chapter. I love the respect they all try to give Emma. A lot of gentlemen.
Perhaps these are not errors just a different way of saying things to what we do Down Under? get the wheel barr(ow)[el] too?"
Maybe you say it differently to us? she grabbed the wheel barr(ow)[el].
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Another almost saucy chapter. I love the respect they all try to give Emma. A lot of gentlemen.
Perhaps these are not errors just a different way of saying things to what we do Down Under? get the wheel barr(ow)[el] too?"
Maybe you say it differently to us? she grabbed the wheel barr(ow)[el].
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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I have fixed the wheelbarrow. It's one word. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Yeah I had hoped we were on the "same page" hehe. Are you connected to Brett West our FS Bro in the Lord? He is about to have surgery on several tumours and needs our prayers.
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Yes, I know him. I've been praying for him.
Comment from BethShelby
I know it was a good so many showed up to help and bring food, but it seems some of them has made Seth and Emma feel uncomfortable about playing around with the water hose. I'm enjoying the way you slowly build the relationship in you love stories.
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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I know it was a good so many showed up to help and bring food, but it seems some of them has made Seth and Emma feel uncomfortable about playing around with the water hose. I'm enjoying the way you slowly build the relationship in you love stories.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I like the idea of new foods, too, in your story. I never knew that beignets are a New Orleans food. Building a cement dog kennel can be much work. Emma got a shocker that embarrassed her. A shy girl perhaps?
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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I like the idea of new foods, too, in your story. I never knew that beignets are a New Orleans food. Building a cement dog kennel can be much work. Emma got a shocker that embarrassed her. A shy girl perhaps?
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Emma is very innocent. Her parented protected. All of that will slowly come out. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
Seth and Emma are getting to know each other, in more ways than one. The early throes of awareness in mutual attraction can be difficult to navigate, and all sorts of awkwardness will Mount, before familiarity is established. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Seth and Emma are getting to know each other, in more ways than one. The early throes of awareness in mutual attraction can be difficult to navigate, and all sorts of awkwardness will Mount, before familiarity is established. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Barbara,
The story's plot is relatable and well-developed. I love the characters, they are the kind that you miss when the story is over. It has been fun to follow the chapters, this one is too. I am familiar with the gossip that goes on in small towns, I grew up in a place that is natural to do it. I hope Emma and Seth overcome the age difference situation.
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Hello, Barbara,
The story's plot is relatable and well-developed. I love the characters, they are the kind that you miss when the story is over. It has been fun to follow the chapters, this one is too. I am familiar with the gossip that goes on in small towns, I grew up in a place that is natural to do it. I hope Emma and Seth overcome the age difference situation.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and understanding.
Comment from jmdg1954
You keep reading the reader with Seth's and Emma's romance; like when is it going to happen? If ever? I can understand Seth's POV of 30vs22. But she's not a child! And there's no age barrier if the feeling is real!
We'll just wait and see. Good chapter with a little banter.
John
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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You keep reading the reader with Seth's and Emma's romance; like when is it going to happen? If ever? I can understand Seth's POV of 30vs22. But she's not a child! And there's no age barrier if the feeling is real!
We'll just wait and see. Good chapter with a little banter.
John
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Seth will come to realize that Emma is not a child and it will be a shock to him. I am building the romance. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You made the water fight seem fun. You moved the relationship along nicely. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. You made the water fight seem fun. You moved the relationship along nicely. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
Another small town, ultra conservative, nice, friendly, and helpful slice of life chapter that your FanStory fans will enjoy. I think the structure and editing are strong. I saw nothing that glared out to me.
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Another small town, ultra conservative, nice, friendly, and helpful slice of life chapter that your FanStory fans will enjoy. I think the structure and editing are strong. I saw nothing that glared out to me.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Back in March I did a meet the author night, in a rather small conservative city, 30,000 people. A lady, who purchased one of my books searched me out and called me. She wanted to have lunch with me. I did. She also bought all the rest of my books because she liked that one so much. It's not just my FanStory fans who like my books. Other's do too.
Comment from w.j.debi
The interaction between these two is believable and entertaining to read. Oh, the gossip one little water fight might cause in such a small town. Poor Emma and Seth. They obviously like each other, but Seth is hesitant due to the age gap. I like that things are progressing at the rate they are. They really haven't known each other too long and still have a lot to discover.
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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The interaction between these two is believable and entertaining to read. Oh, the gossip one little water fight might cause in such a small town. Poor Emma and Seth. They obviously like each other, but Seth is hesitant due to the age gap. I like that things are progressing at the rate they are. They really haven't known each other too long and still have a lot to discover.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Thank you for understanding and the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
You've captured the old-fashioned "barn building" so prominent in the small town early West, with all the neighbors getting involved in an activity. It's a good touch. Like it.
Seth's eyes darted to Emma's dripping wet face and then crept down. Once they came to her breasts, he turned away. [This is not wrong, Barbara. But if you'll allow my take, I believe I'd have Seth crack just a trace of a grin before looking away. It adds a little edginess to his moral rectitude. Maybe not so important as I read further.]
"I should've known better." [LOL, how telling is that?]
A good chapter with the reader left feeling a palpable tension between Emma and Seth.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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You've captured the old-fashioned "barn building" so prominent in the small town early West, with all the neighbors getting involved in an activity. It's a good touch. Like it.
Seth's eyes darted to Emma's dripping wet face and then crept down. Once they came to her breasts, he turned away. [This is not wrong, Barbara. But if you'll allow my take, I believe I'd have Seth crack just a trace of a grin before looking away. It adds a little edginess to his moral rectitude. Maybe not so important as I read further.]
"I should've known better." [LOL, how telling is that?]
A good chapter with the reader left feeling a palpable tension between Emma and Seth.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Seth still looks at Emma as a child. When he realizes she's not, it hits him like a brick. Thank you for the kind review.
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Right! That's why the words "I should've known better" struck such a chord in me.
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LOL I thought it was cute.