Stones
An acrostic27 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
"Stones" is a beautiful journey through time. The steady pace of this poem transforms the stone to beauty as minerals combine. Beautiful! Photo to words. Best JohnC
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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"Stones" is a beautiful journey through time. The steady pace of this poem transforms the stone to beauty as minerals combine. Beautiful! Photo to words. Best JohnC
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Thank you John! I really appreciate the kind review! Best wishes to you
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was so good it was scary. I'm used to reading acrostic that sound more like alphabetized grocery lists. Yours had a natural flow. I like the fact that the intro and final line were the same. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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This was so good it was scary. I'm used to reading acrostic that sound more like alphabetized grocery lists. Yours had a natural flow. I like the fact that the intro and final line were the same. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Thank you Gretchen! I?m flattered! Best wishes to you
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Mike,
This short acrostic reminds us how Earth's pressure and time can change
ugly stones to beautiful gemstones.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good day.
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Hi Mike,
This short acrostic reminds us how Earth's pressure and time can change
ugly stones to beautiful gemstones.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good day.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Thank you Joan! Best wishes to you!
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No problem, Mike.
Joan
Comment from JSD
Excellent little acrostic that perfectly sums up the beauty, strength and possibilities of the subject. This reads easily with no awkwardnesses and the picture fits perfectly. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Excellent little acrostic that perfectly sums up the beauty, strength and possibilities of the subject. This reads easily with no awkwardnesses and the picture fits perfectly. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate that!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Mike.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good acrostic with a good topic.
-I like your font choices, too.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You have a good progression of
the process of how the original
material is formed into stone.
-I like the repetition of the first line at the end,
and the line "Nurtured at a steady pace."
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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-Nice image and presentation, Mike.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good acrostic with a good topic.
-I like your font choices, too.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You have a good progression of
the process of how the original
material is formed into stone.
-I like the repetition of the first line at the end,
and the line "Nurtured at a steady pace."
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kindness. Best wishes to you!
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You are very welcome, and best wishes to you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine rhyming acrostic to describe different stones of value here Mike and I enjoyed the journey, good luck with the acrostic contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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A fine rhyming acrostic to describe different stones of value here Mike and I enjoyed the journey, good luck with the acrostic contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Thank you Dolly! I?m glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Barry Penfold
Clever poem which should make its mark on the judges. Never thought stones would be a topic chosen but hey I believe it works . All the best for the competition and take care. Keep writing and have a good day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Clever poem which should make its mark on the judges. Never thought stones would be a topic chosen but hey I believe it works . All the best for the competition and take care. Keep writing and have a good day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much! Best wishes to you