Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this addition to the story. I am really liking it. I can't wait to see what happens next and how you tie it all in together. This is a very good write and I couldn't find any way to improve it.

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 Comment Written 18-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023

Thank you so much, Barbara! Coming from you, I'm honored!!
I am trying to blend the two stories and will soon reunite.Thank you for staying with the transition time.

Take care
Rhonda

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Your story is getting better with each chapter. You do such an excellent job with the dialogue which really brings the whole thing to life. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Nice work.

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 Comment Written 18-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023

Awww, that's so sweet. I'm hanging in there writing, thanks for the encouragement and the comments.

I try to lean on dialogue to avoid a tendency of mine to dump information.

Thank you again,
Rhonda