Guided by Faith
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Comment from jmdg1954
Any fan who has been with you from chapter one or thereabouts, should welcome you member dollars. You have been very generous. Those complaining are just dollar scavengers! The only reason they read are to grasp the $$$$.
This story is getting very interesting. I like Seth's moxie in arresting that "B" that rhymes with itch and getting closer to Emma.
Looking forward to more.
Have a great Sunday...
John
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Any fan who has been with you from chapter one or thereabouts, should welcome you member dollars. You have been very generous. Those complaining are just dollar scavengers! The only reason they read are to grasp the $$$$.
This story is getting very interesting. I like Seth's moxie in arresting that "B" that rhymes with itch and getting closer to Emma.
Looking forward to more.
Have a great Sunday...
John
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from w.j.debi
An excellent chapter. I was happy to see that Ms. Barton is being dealt with. Talk about pushy. I guess she felt she had Emma out of the way and Seth all to herself. Surprise. She is pushy Seth away.
Emma does have a lot to deal with at the moment. Thankfully, Seth is there for her and visa versa.
Thanks for the author notes about cocaine babies.
I actually prefer longer chapters so I don't have to wait for what comes next, but I understand that is not the norm for FS readers. I am trying to keep the chapters for my current novella to around 900 words because I was told it might get me more readers. It feels so constricting but its only an experiment.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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An excellent chapter. I was happy to see that Ms. Barton is being dealt with. Talk about pushy. I guess she felt she had Emma out of the way and Seth all to herself. Surprise. She is pushy Seth away.
Emma does have a lot to deal with at the moment. Thankfully, Seth is there for her and visa versa.
Thanks for the author notes about cocaine babies.
I actually prefer longer chapters so I don't have to wait for what comes next, but I understand that is not the norm for FS readers. I am trying to keep the chapters for my current novella to around 900 words because I was told it might get me more readers. It feels so constricting but its only an experiment.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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It's true, it does get more readers, but you still need to add money to it. Thank you for the kind review.
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Just like real life. If you don't promote your book, it won't sell.
Comment from Daylily
This is a wonderful chapter with relationships growing and others being healed. It flows well and leaves readers eager for the next chapter.
I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving, as well, Barbara.
X X Lily
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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This is a wonderful chapter with relationships growing and others being healed. It flows well and leaves readers eager for the next chapter.
I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving, as well, Barbara.
X X Lily
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I love this story! This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words, authentic dialogues, and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy, as I did. You write and develop characters that are relatable and consistent. Thank you for sharing this!
Have a great week!
With hugs,
Alex :)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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I love this story! This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words, authentic dialogues, and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy, as I did. You write and develop characters that are relatable and consistent. Thank you for sharing this!
Have a great week!
With hugs,
Alex :)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Jacob1395
Now I want to know more about Emma's birth mother, I wish I had the next chapter to read right now. I could really feel the emotions Emma was going through in your writing, it's right she's been through a lot in the past few days, and I was glad to see that Seth still values their friendship. Another excellent chapter Barbara.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Now I want to know more about Emma's birth mother, I wish I had the next chapter to read right now. I could really feel the emotions Emma was going through in your writing, it's right she's been through a lot in the past few days, and I was glad to see that Seth still values their friendship. Another excellent chapter Barbara.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, this is another great chapter you have penned. I love all the great dialogue and great details. That song is a great song that holds true today! I pray you have a very blessed Thanksgiving also! love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Barbara, this is another great chapter you have penned. I love all the great dialogue and great details. That song is a great song that holds true today! I pray you have a very blessed Thanksgiving also! love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
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You are so welcome!
Comment from nomi338
Like any other human condition, I do not believe that there is a hard fast rule covering substance abuse through addiction. I have known people who were addicted to their first hit of a drug. I have known others who were able to use a drug for recreational purposes and were able to put that drug use aside and function as successfully as any non-drug user.
As for Peggy Barton, it is about time she learned, that you cannot force someone to love you, especially when you use crass sexuality in an effort to seduce someone who plainly does not want you.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Like any other human condition, I do not believe that there is a hard fast rule covering substance abuse through addiction. I have known people who were addicted to their first hit of a drug. I have known others who were able to use a drug for recreational purposes and were able to put that drug use aside and function as successfully as any non-drug user.
As for Peggy Barton, it is about time she learned, that you cannot force someone to love you, especially when you use crass sexuality in an effort to seduce someone who plainly does not want you.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thank you for sharing your words of wisdom.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
My goodness gracious you do leave us with our jaw hanging open till the next one. This was great and I am sure we will get more details later, but give her a rest. She has been through quite enough. Give Peggy problems for a while.:-) Karen
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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My goodness gracious you do leave us with our jaw hanging open till the next one. This was great and I am sure we will get more details later, but give her a rest. She has been through quite enough. Give Peggy problems for a while.:-) Karen
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. The next few of posting things will be better understood and be good for Emma. I hope. LOL
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have a great week. Karen
Comment from royowen
Emma's quite definitely overly proud, Seth is only trying to step into the gap, mainly to protect her from here self, although she she's got a mean adversary in Peggy, but Seth has taken care of her. It seems Emma's fifteen year old mother put her up for adoption, and that's why she's adopted, adoptees are usually so much better off than some who have natural parents, there's no difference really, well dine, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Emma's quite definitely overly proud, Seth is only trying to step into the gap, mainly to protect her from here self, although she she's got a mean adversary in Peggy, but Seth has taken care of her. It seems Emma's fifteen year old mother put her up for adoption, and that's why she's adopted, adoptees are usually so much better off than some who have natural parents, there's no difference really, well dine, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
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Most welcome
Comment from Ulla
Well, being adopted myself I sympathise a long way with this. Of course, what I have no experience of is to have a mother of crack cocaine. My real mother just couldn't afford to have me. I found my real mother in 2003, so I know.
I think Emma is an anxious person. She could do with a little self confidence. Ulla:)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Well, being adopted myself I sympathise a long way with this. Of course, what I have no experience of is to have a mother of crack cocaine. My real mother just couldn't afford to have me. I found my real mother in 2003, so I know.
I think Emma is an anxious person. She could do with a little self confidence. Ulla:)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Emma will be starting to grow and come out of her shell. Thank you for the kind review.