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Guided by Faith

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Can faith guide our path?

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Comment from Teri7
Exceptional
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Barbara, this is another great chapter you have penned. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue. I was so happy to see them saying I love you. I hope you have a wonderful time with your son, and I hope he has a very happy and blessed birthday!

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Teri7 on 11-Mar-2024
    you are so welcome!💕❤️
Comment from Daylily
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This is another satisfying chapter that ends in just the right way. I am looking forward to reading your final posting even though it means the book is finished.

re: She sat on the couch and patted a spot for him to sit. "There hasn't been really a chance before, -- really been instead of been really


 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the kind review. I have made the correction. Thank you.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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There's been so much uncertainty between Seth and Emma and their relationship has been hampered by events. But, at last, we see a very welcome meeting of minds with that proposal ever closer. Nicely done, Barbara, in preparation for your final chapter. Thanks for sharing this excellent story. Debbie

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
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Excellent chapter, and things are indeed working out well for both. Now we just need the proposal, and her acceptance to complete the ending. Well done on this fine story.
Wendy

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
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I glad they got that out in the open. Some people have trouble saying the words I love you even when someone says those words to them. I can imagine why she felt he deserved someone better than her. I have a feel he will that box out soon.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you for kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Jim Wile
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Yes! At last. Finally. Hurrah! The wait is over. They're on the same wavelength now. Simpatico. You've put me out of my misery now, Barbara. Thank you!

Now all is right with the world, and I can finally relax. She loves him!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the uplifting review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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True feelings are finally shared and an engagement may seal the deal. The future looks bright for these two. The line dancing video is a lot of fun, I would love to take part. This is a fine positive progression for this sweet natured story and I enjoyed this wonderful chapter Barbara, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you for this encouraging review.
Comment from jmdg1954
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Excellent chapter with the feelings of these two now out in the open.
We'll have to wait and see where it goes... proposal, ring, wedding...

Check this line-
I prayed and didn't have a good feeling so (I) turned them down.

Okay. Till next week.
John

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the catch. I appreciate the help and support.
Comment from judiverse
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Love the video. Steps look more complicated than I recall from the Texas line dancing. Or maybe it's because I've gotten older. Jake is really persistent in his desire to see Seth and Emma engaged. After all she's been through, Emma has matured a bit so she won't be so quick to act as if she's to blame for things that have happened. Hard to believe those five job offers. I never had such luck. The sentence starting "I'll be teaching fifth grade,,,sounds a bit too formal. It looks like the proposal's coming up. It seems like a short time since they met, but all Emma's problems have drawn them together. Great chapter, and I'm glad to see the healing going on for her. judi

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you for this kind review. I'll recheck that sentence.
reply by judiverse on 10-Mar-2024
    You're welcome. Hope you're having a great Sunday. judi
Comment from eliz100
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This is another excellent chapter. The relationship between Seth and me is peeking at just the right time. I do not like books to end, it feels like I lost something special.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the kind review. Amazing how it happens that they committee to each other at the end. LOL