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Comment from royowen
I can remember my son in law who is married to my elder daughter, Rebecca, who is a Conservatorium graduate, had a close friend who was engaged to a Diva, who spoke like that with the lengthened syllables, and bossy, never actually married in the end, I love these stories of yours, they would be a challenge,, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I can remember my son in law who is married to my elder daughter, Rebecca, who is a Conservatorium graduate, had a close friend who was engaged to a Diva, who spoke like that with the lengthened syllables, and bossy, never actually married in the end, I love these stories of yours, they would be a challenge,, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy.
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Most welcome
Comment from BethShelby
This is another twist with someone that sounds like real character. I'm interested in how the rest of the trip will play out. I like your joke. Does that mean your husband doesn't get a chance to talk?
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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This is another twist with someone that sounds like real character. I'm interested in how the rest of the trip will play out. I like your joke. Does that mean your husband doesn't get a chance to talk?
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Yes, it certainly does!!! He is a VERY, very quiet man...and an accountant, no less!!! (And obviously a saint.)
Comment from GWHARGIS
You got me with the joke first, then lulled me into a sentimental moment with a sad and confused Rebekah. Then the ventriloquist act of us trying to speak about Jane had me spit my water out. I could see it. Jane's explanation of seeing you for five seconds cemented her reputation of crazy. I think I enjoyed this chapter too much. Gretchen
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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You got me with the joke first, then lulled me into a sentimental moment with a sad and confused Rebekah. Then the ventriloquist act of us trying to speak about Jane had me spit my water out. I could see it. Jane's explanation of seeing you for five seconds cemented her reputation of crazy. I think I enjoyed this chapter too much. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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You make it so easy to write a follow-up when you give me such a great chapter of your own! Can't wait for next week's installment!! xoxox
Comment from Begin Again
Oh, the fun continues! The road trip is going to be something with the "nut case" riding shotgun.... stick her in the trunk and slam it. LOL Nicely done, RAchelle. I enjoyed the chapter and the nice change of clothes.
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Oh, the fun continues! The road trip is going to be something with the "nut case" riding shotgun.... stick her in the trunk and slam it. LOL Nicely done, RAchelle. I enjoyed the chapter and the nice change of clothes.
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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No, Carol; I worry she'll do something awful to my new clothes that Tova bestowed!!!
Thank you for this delightful review. Very much appreciated. xoxo