Prime Mover
A Nonet26 total reviews
Comment from CM Pickard
Great imagery here, in such a small space you have a beautifully reflective piece that has a calming effect. I like how you linked nature to god in this as well to finish it off strong.
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Great imagery here, in such a small space you have a beautifully reflective piece that has a calming effect. I like how you linked nature to god in this as well to finish it off strong.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
God is certainly imposing and immense, but I sure would not want a God that we had all figured out. There is some comfort in the thought that he has it covered.
Great piece of work!
D
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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God is certainly imposing and immense, but I sure would not want a God that we had all figured out. There is some comfort in the thought that he has it covered.
Great piece of work!
D
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you Douglas.
Comment from lyenochka
This is a great praise poem! Indeed God's ways are so far above our limited minds. All His works are beyond our understanding! Good syllabic count in your nonet. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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This is a great praise poem! Indeed God's ways are so far above our limited minds. All His works are beyond our understanding! Good syllabic count in your nonet. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Don.
You have done an excellent job following the nonet style. The title "Prime Mover" exemplifies the subject of the poem. The subject is the creator and the mover of the water, not the water. You've written it very well and I wish you the best in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Hey Don.
You have done an excellent job following the nonet style. The title "Prime Mover" exemplifies the subject of the poem. The subject is the creator and the mover of the water, not the water. You've written it very well and I wish you the best in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you Robert so very much.
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You're welcome
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This piece is so enjoyable! Your use of sound in "thunderous roar" really brings the poem to life. It's a thought provoking. And I like how you show our experience in relation to God. Well done.
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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This piece is so enjoyable! Your use of sound in "thunderous roar" really brings the poem to life. It's a thought provoking. And I like how you show our experience in relation to God. Well done.
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Thank you Michael, you are very kind.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great poem. I love the way it rhymes all the way to bottom of the poem. I love the picture it helps give the reader a vision of the poem.
Great Job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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This is a great poem. I love the way it rhymes all the way to bottom of the poem. I love the picture it helps give the reader a vision of the poem.
Great Job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much Cecilia.
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You're welcome