The Meld
Strange life beyond man21 total reviews
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your 5-7-5 poem intriguingly captures a vivid and otherworldly scene. The imagery of "death cloud mutants weep" and "mastery of the weird meld" creates a powerful sense of mystery and fantasy. The final line, "mesh of manitree," adds a fascinating twist, blending elements of nature and transformation.
Thank you for sharing this creative and thought-provoking piece
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Your 5-7-5 poem intriguingly captures a vivid and otherworldly scene. The imagery of "death cloud mutants weep" and "mastery of the weird meld" creates a powerful sense of mystery and fantasy. The final line, "mesh of manitree," adds a fascinating twist, blending elements of nature and transformation.
Thank you for sharing this creative and thought-provoking piece
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Awesome Peter.I'm really happy you like it! Perfect insight to a poem that is a bit obscure. Definitely.I understand which is very cool! Thank you again, peter.I'm always happy to see you here.Hope to enjoy your day!
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Take care my friend and keep writing.
Stay safe.